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The city of my soul
I love the town where I was born, I love the city where I live and I love St. Petersburg. St. Petersburg is the city of my soul. The atmosphere in this city corresponds on state of my mind. I feel it every time when I arrive. It is a dark and majestic city.I love this grey sky, magnificent architecture, the embankments and canals, wonderful people.
There are many interesting places: museums, palaces, restaurants, bars, coffeshops. Every place has a unique atmosphere, similar to the atmosphere of the city in general.
I really adore local bookstores! I never leave St. Petersburg without a book haul.
Me and my best friend* were in St. Petersburg twice this year. We stayed in different places. I was impressed by one place in particular when we stayed last time. It was the room in a grand historic building with the Atlanteans on the facade. I have not the words to describe that, so I a attach a picture.
*Me and my best friend (colloquial) were ... or, my best friend and I were (formal)...
Very well written!
The city of my soul
I love the town where I was born, I love the city where I live and I love St. Petersburg. St. Petersburg is the city of my soul.> I love the city where I was born, the city where I used to live and I love the most-- St. Petersburg -- is the city of my soul.
Atmosphere in this city corresponds to state of my mind. I feel it every time when I arrived. It is the dark and majestic city.
> The atmosphere in this city corresponds to the nature/state of my mind. I can feel it whenever I am there . It is a captivating and majestic city.
I love this grey sky, magnificent architecture, the embankments and canals, wonderful people.
> I love the grey sky there, its magnificent architectures, its embankments and canals , and the wonderful people of the city.
There are many interesting places: museums, palaces, restaurants, bars, coffeshops. Every place have unique atmosphere, which similar to the atmosphere of the city in general.
> There are many interesting places we can go to in St. Petersburg : museums, palaces, restaurants, bars, and coffee shops. Every place has a unique atmosphere about it, a certain uniqueness that characterises the city in general .
I really adore the local bookstores. I have never left St. Petersburg without buying a haul of books .book haul.
Me and My best friend and I were in St. Petersburg twice this year. We stayed in different places. I was impressed by the place where when we I stayed the last time. Then, I was staying in a the room in grand historic building with Atlanteans decorating its façade. I have not words to describe it, so I will just attach a picture of the building below.
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