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Memorable experience I think one of the most memorable experiences for me was a decision to learn to drive a car. I was 16 and I watched a film where a girl of my age drove her car desperately fast. I wanted to know how to drive and asked my Dad for helping me. My brother is so into driving and he also tought me. When I first sat in front of the steering wheel I was so scared I couldn't do anything. Now I realize that my father was scared much more than I was. When I suddenly broke hard, rearview mirror had dropped off and my dear Dad hit his forehead against the wind screen. So, do you know what was curiously? He didn' shout at me at all. We had fun that day. I knew my father was there, near me, it always meant that everything would be all right. I was sure about it.

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Memorable experience

I think one of the most memorable experiences for me was a decision to learn to drive a car.
I was 16 and I watched a film where a girl of my age drove her car desperately fast. I wanted to know how to drive and asked my Dad to help me. My brother is so into driving and he also taught me. When I first sat in front of the steering wheel I was so scared I couldn't do anything. Now I realize that my father was scared much more than I was. When I suddenly braked hard, the rearview mirror dropped off and my dear Dad hit his forehead against the wind screen. So, do you know what was strange? He didn't shout at me at all. We had fun that day. I knew my father was there, near me; it always meant that everything would be all right. I was sure about it.

"Dad" is sometimes not capitalized, but it is stylistically acceptable to capitalize it, particularly in direct address.

"brake" past tense= "braked"

"break" past tense="broke"

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Memorable experience

I think one of the most memorable experiences for me was learning to drive a car.
I was 16 and I watched a film where a girl of my age drove her car dangerously fast. I wanted to know how to drive and asked my Dad for help. My brother loves driving and he also taught me. When I first sat in front of the steering wheel I was so scared I couldn't do anything. Now I realize that my father was more scared than I was. When I suddenly braked hard, the rear view mirror fell off and my dear Dad hit his forehead against the windscreen. So, do you know what I found strange? He didn't shout at me at all. We had fun that day. I knew my father was there, near me. It always means that everything will be all right. I am sure about that.
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Memorable experience

I think one of my most memorable experiences was the decision to learn to drive.
I was 16 and had just watched a film where a girl my age drove her car desperately fast. I wanted to know how to drive and asked my Dad to help me. My brother was so into driving and so he also taught me. When I first sat in front of the steering wheel I was so scared I couldn't do anything. Now I realize that my father was scared much more than I was. When I suddenly broke hard, the rear-view mirror had dropped off and my poor Dad hit his forehead against the windscreen. Do you know what was funny? He didn't shout at me at all. We had fun that day. I knew my father was there, near me and that always meant that everything would be all right. I was sure about it.

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