Visit Ireland
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My friend is aupair in Ireland. She went to Ireland in August because she want to learn a lot of english and living a new experience. Since it we talk to Skype. She told me that She is very happy because the family treat she like one more of family. She take care a three children, two girls and one boy. Also, She do some chores like cooking food or clean house. In addittion, she go to academy for study english and she free time for visit places and meet another aupairs.
I miss she and I decide to visit she. I will travel to Ireland in a plane for five days. I'm very excited. Because I have never travel alone. This is a new adventure!
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My visit to Ireland
Hello!My friend is an aupair in Ireland. She went to Ireland there in August because she wanted to learn a lot of english and living to have/ to enjoy a new experience. Since it then we talk / talked to on Skype. She told me that she is very happy because the family treats she her like one more of family. She takes care a of three children, two girls and one boy. Also, She does some chores like cooking food or cleaning the house. In addittion Also she goes to the academy for to study english and she has free time for to visit places and meet another other aupairs.
I miss she her and so I have decided to visit she her. I will travel to Ireland in a by plane and stay for five days. I'm very excited because I have never travelled alone. This is a new adventure!
bien hecho ! Ten cuidado con la repetición de palabras en frases ;
I would have said : '' ...she is happy because the family treats her like one of their own.
gracias
Ciarán
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A Visit to Ireland
Hello!My friend is an au pair in Ireland. She went to Ireland in August because she wanted to learn a lot of English and have a new experience. Since she went, we have been talking on Skype. She told me that she is very happy because the family treats her like one of the family. She takes care of three children: two girls and one boy. Also, she does some chores like cooking food and cleaning the house. In addition, she goes to an academy to study English, and she has free time for visiting places and meeting other au pairs.
I miss her and I have decided to visit her. I will travel to Ireland by plane for five days. I'm very excited because I have never traveled alone. This is a new adventure!
*Great work! I hope you enjoy your time in Ireland! :)
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Visit Ireland
Hello!My friend is an aupair in Ireland. She went to Ireland in August because she wants to learn a lot of english and living have a new experience. Since it then we talk to on Skype. She told me that she is very happy because the family treat she her like one more of the family. She takes care a of three children, two girls and one boy. Also, she does some chores like cooking food or cleaning the house. In addition, she goes to an academy for to study english and she has free time for visit places and meet another aupairs.
I miss she her and I have decided to visit she her. I will travel to Ireland in a by plane and stay for five days. I'm very excited because I have never travelled alone. This is a new adventure!
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