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Check please my news report. Moscow carries out the Greek Art Festival. This week on the eighth of November the Art Festival, which was devoted to the year of Greek Culture, took place in Red Square in Moscow. The Art Festival embraced all genres of creativity: painting, sculpture, music, poetry, choreography, cinema, animation, and many other things. Its main task was to unite the creator and the viewer, and give everyone chances for awakening creative potential. The feature of the event was the presence of a large quantity of foreigners. It is amazing that flags of different countries were painted on faces of all visitors in order to emphasize the variety of nationalities. Although Red Square is not very broad for such events, anyone willing was able to see everything what interested him most of all. On the occasion of the Art Festival, Red Square was transformed into a real art platform. There were some stages, screens, tents, and a lot of loudspeakers which were playing Greek songs creating a real feeling of a festive occasion. It is important to note that a lot of celebrities attended the Art Festival. Also Red Square was equipped with medical cars, food tents, and police squad. The role of such events is very essential. They further advanced ties of friendship and cooperation between countries. Besides, such activities enrich knowledge and culture of people.

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Check please my news report.

Moscow carries out the Greek Art Festival.
This week on the eighth of November the Art Festival, which was devoted to the year of Greek Culture, took place in Red Square in Moscow.
The Art Festival embraced all genres of creativity: painting, sculpture, music, poetry, choreography, cinema, animation, and many others. Its main task was to unite the creator and the viewer, and give everyone a chance for awakening creative potential. The interesting feature of the event was the presence of a large number of foreigners. It is amazing how flags of different countries were painted on faces of all visitors in order to emphasize the variety of nationalities. Although Red Square is not very large, as would be expected for such an event, anyone willing was able to see everything that interested them most of all. On the occasion of the Art Festival, Red Square was transformed into a real art platform. There were some Stages, screens, tents, and a lot of loudspeakers which were playing Greek songs created a real feeling of a festive occasion. It is important to note that a lot of celebrities attended the Art Festival. For the occasion,  Red Square was equipped with medical cars, food tents, and a police squad.
The role of such events is very essential. They further advance ties* of friendship and cooperation between countries. Besides, such activities enrich knowledge and culture of people.


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*Strange phrasing. Consider using "develop bonds/relationship" or "strengthen ties" instead. :)

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Check please my news report.( Check my news report ,please or Please check my news report.)

Moscow carries out the Greek Art Festival.
This week on the eighth of November the Art Festival, which was devoted to the year of Greek Culture, took place in Red Square in Moscow.
The Art Festival embraced all genres of creativity: painting, sculpture, music, poetry, choreography, cinema, animation, and many other things. Its main task was to unite the creator and the viewer, and give everyone chances for awakening creative potential. The feature of the event was the presence of a large quantity of foreigners. It is amazing that flags of different countries were painted on faces of all visitors in order to emphasize the variety of nationalities. Although Red Square is not very broad for such events, anyone willing was able to see everything what interested them the most. On the occasion of the Art Festival, Red Square was transformed into a real art platform. There were some stages, screens, tents, and a lot of loudspeakers which were playing Greek songs creating a real feeling of a festive occasion. It is important to note that a lot of celebrities attended the Art Festival. Also Red Square was equipped with medical cars, food tents, and police squad.
The role of such events is very essential. They further advanced ties of friendship and cooperation between countries. Besides, such activities enrich knowledge and culture of people.



The other errors was corrected by my friend before.

Any way great festival. I like it.

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