inspiration (please amend it. thank you )
all of us usually wait for inspiration to start a thing ,because we believe that inspiration is the most important element for everything .whereas, as the saying goes ,action always generates inspiration but inspiration seldom generates action .So ,Do not wait ,move and find the inspiration that we need.
Action is a great thing ,cause when you are act ,one way have growing pains ,encounter troubles and difficults and suffer adversities ,only solve these problem can we find inspiration .when I'm in trouble ,i move it immediately instead of think about inspiration that i need .inspiration isn't always surround you .
I think that reading and simulation is a good way for develop inspiration .Book is a great teacher who can teach me how to got inspiration and provide some good way to study ,then i simulate it .
life is beautiful and inspiration everywhere .
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inspiration (please amend it. thank you )
All of us usually wait for inspiration before we start a thing/ something ,because we believe that inspiration is the most important element for us to do everything/ anything .whereas, as the saying goes ,action always generates inspiration but inspiration seldom generates action .So ,Do not wait ,move and find the inspiration that you need.Action is a great thing , cause when you act , you may have growing pains, encounter troubles and difficulty and suffer adversities. You only have to solve these problem and then can you find inspiration .when I'm in trouble ,i move it immediately instead of thinking about inspiration that i need. Inspiration isn't always surround you.
I think that reading and stimulation is a good way for developing inspiration. A book is a great teacher, it can teach you how to get inspiration and provide some good ways to study, then simulate it .
life is beautiful and inspiration is everywhere.
Comments:
- you vs. we = this is quite 'poetic' writing. When you want to address your readers/ audience, you can use 'you' or 'we'. However, depending on if you use 'you' or 'we' that changes some of the words, sentence and grammar. So I just tried to use 'you' whenever you are addressing the reader.
- "inspiration isn't always surrond you" = A more natural way is:
"Inspiration isn't always around you"
"You are surrounded by inspiration"
* You wrote really well!
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