9 November 2016
请帮我检查这些句子
1. 回家以前我去阅览室看新的法国报纸和杂志。Before going home I go to a reading hall to read French newspapers and magazines.
2. 我的本子在哪儿？Where is my notebook?
在王老师。我的本子也在他。Teacher Wang has it. He has my notebook too.
3. 每个晚上你在家吗？Are you at home every evening?
晚上工作后我有时候回家，有时候去看我的朋友，去跟他们看电影。In the evening after work sometimes I go home, sometimes I go see my friends, together we go to cinema.
4. 我不吃午饭在学院的食堂，我每天在家吃午饭。I don't eat lunch at institute's canteen, every day I eat lunch at home.
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1. 回家以前我去阅览室看新的法国报纸和杂志。（回家之前，我去阅览室看了新的法国报纸和杂志。）Before going home I go to a reading hall to read French newspapers and magazines.
在王老师。我的本子也在他。（在王老师那里，我的本子也在他那里。）Teacher Wang has it. He has my notebook too.
3. 每个晚上你在家吗？（每个晚上你都在家吗？）Are you at home every evening?
晚上工作后我有时候回家，有时候去看我的朋友，去跟他们看电影。（晚上工作后有时候我会回家，有时候会去看我的朋友，我们会一起去看电影）In the evening after work sometimes I go home, sometimes I go see my friends, together we go to cinema.
4. 我不吃午饭在学院的食堂，我每天在家吃午饭。（我不在学校食堂吃午饭，我每天都在家里吃。）I don't eat lunch at institute's canteen, every day I eat lunch at home.
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9 November 2016
请帮我检查这些句子1. 回家以之前我去阅览室看新的（建议：今日的）法国报纸和杂志。Before（在....之前） going home I go to a reading hall to read French newspapers and magazines.
2. 我的本子在哪儿？Where is my notebook? is great！
在王老师那。我的本子也在他那里。Teacher Wang has it. He has my notebook too.
3. 每个晚上你在家吗？Are you at home every evening?is great！
晚上工作后我有时候回家，有时候去看我的朋友，去跟和他们看电影。In the evening after work sometimes I go home, sometimes I go see my friends, together we go to cinema.
4. 我不吃午饭在学院的食堂
我不在学院食堂吃午饭，我每天在家吃午饭（Can omit）。I don't eat lunch at institute's canteen, every day I eat lunch at home.
Thank you ！
YOU ARE GREAT！
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9 November 2016
请帮我检查这些句子1. 回家以前我去阅览室看新的法国报纸和杂志。Before going home I go to a reading hall to read French newspapers and magazines.
2. 我的本子在哪儿？Where is my notebook?
在王老师那里。我的本子也在他那。Teacher Wang has it. He has my notebook too.
3. 每个晚上你每天晚上都在家吗？Are you at home every evening?
晚上工作后（=下班后）我有时候回家，有时候去看我的朋友，去跟他们去看电影。In the evening after work sometimes I go home, sometimes I go see my friends, together we go to cinema.
4. 我不吃午饭在学院的食堂吃午饭，我每天在家吃（午饭）。I don't eat lunch at institute's canteen, every day I eat lunch at home.
注：有时候=有时，但用“有时”更简洁。
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9 November 2016
请帮我检查这些句子1. 回家前，我去阅览室看了法国报纸和杂志。Before going home I go to a reading hall to read French newspapers and magazines.
2. 我的本子在哪儿？Where is my notebook?
在王老师那（里）。我的本子也在他那（里）。Teacher Wang has it. He has my notebook too.
3. 你每个晚上都在家吗？Are you at home every evening?
晚上工作后我有时候回家，有时候去看我的朋友，去跟他们看电影。In the evening after work sometimes I go home, sometimes I go see my friends, together we go to cinema.
4. 我不在学院食堂吃午饭，我每天在家吃。I don't eat lunch at institute's canteen, every day I eat lunch at home.
Hi, I don't translate you sentences word by word, but in a way closer to oral Chinese.
To be honest, your Chinese is pretty good!
Have a nice day!
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