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The concert of the great rock group. I listened to "Dream Theater" albums for several years and one day I heard they were going to come to Moscow. Somehow, I got the ticket to the concert and I already knew that I would never forget the day I was there! It's really absolutely impossible feeling when you are at a live concert of one of your favourite rock groups. An incredible atmosphere full of unforgettable impressions. A solid and tight sound are hitting you to the chest, filling the space of concert hall. An exciting light show, delicately adding, but not overwhelming the performance. And the musicians themselves, standing on the stage - they were so fantastic, so inimitable. Their individual style of composing music is especially unbelievable. It's like the math of music with a perfect technique of playing. I was delighting with all that compositions with great sound harmony and wonderful and clever lyrics. They played mostly famous songs but also some of the new ones which were so beautiful as they could be. Obviously, at the end, there were standing ovation and even encore. It was the great day of my life!

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Hi there, here are my corrections. Due to the fact that it was a very descriptive, literary piece of writing, certain sentences would not normally be considered complete, but as it is a descriptive piece it is fine. Let me know if you have any questions about it.  I quite like dream theater myself!

The A concert of the by a great rock group.

I had listened to Dream Theater's albums for several years, and one day I heard they were going to come to Moscow. Somehow I got the a ticket to the concert, and I already knew that I would never forget the day I was there! It's really an absolutely impossible unbelievable feeling when you are at a live concert of one of your favourite rock groups.
An incredible atmosphere full of unforgettable impressions moments. A solid and tight sound are hitting hit you to in the chest, filling the space of concert hall. An exciting light show, delicately adding to, but not overwhelming the performance. And the musicians themselves, standing on the stage - they were so fantastic, so inimitable.
Their individual style of composing music is especially unbelievable. It's like the mathematics of music together with a the perfect playing technique of playing. I was delighting delighted with all that of their compositions, which had with great sound harmony and wonderful and clever lyrics. They played mostly their famous songs, but also some of the new ones, which were so as beautiful as they could be. Obviously, at the end, there were they got a standing ovation, and they even did an encore.

It was the greatest day of my life!

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