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Social Network Nowadays people can't imagine their lives without using the Internet, especially social networks. People spend a huge amount of time surfing various communities and discussions, watching photos and pictures. This problem is one of the main issues of our society today. We don't divide information in useful and harmful. Have you ever thought that we absorb damage from mass media and particularly from the Internet? Everyday we read silly posts one by one scrolling them and touching our smartphones' screens. We don't even realize that this is the wasting our time. Time which we could devote to our family, close friends, children. I don't deny that sometimes using the social networks can help us to stay in tonight with people who are far away from us or to find out the information we need for work, for studies. Also there are loads of tricks about raising children, hobby, weather forecasts, etc. Nevertheless, it is vital for our mind to filter incoming information and reject needless one.

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Social Network

Nowadays people can't imagine their lives without using the Internet, especially social networks. People spend a huge amount of time surfing various communities and discussions, watching (looking at) photos and pictures. This problem is one of the main issues of our society today. We don't divide information in useful and harmful. Have you ever thought that we absorb damage from mass media and particularly from the Internet?
Everyday we read silly posts one by one scrolling them and touching our smartphones' screens. We don't even realize that this is the wasting (it's wasting/ we're wasting/it's a waste of) our time. Time which we could devote to our family, close friends, children.
I don't deny that sometimes using the social networks can help us to stay in tonight (touch) with people who are far away from us or to find out (find out) the information we need for work, for studies. Also there are loads of tricks (tips) about raising children, hobby, weather forecasts, etc. Nevertheless, it is vital for our mind (minds) to filter incoming information and reject needless (useless) one.

P.S. I agree)) Good text and good point!

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I wholeheartedly agree with you. This is why I don't have a smartphone but at home I do find myself on Facebook wasting my time watching stupid things. I want to get rid of my Facebook but it is like an addiction! :O You write English very well, by the way :)

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