Some days in Rio de Janeiro
I went to Rio de Janeiro on February, 2016. I was with two friends: Weslley and Larissa.
In this trip we went ,on the first time, to the beach, the weather was sunny and hot. It was terrific, the water's sea is really warm and salty. This is my first shower on the sea, so I have had an unease in my eyes because salt.
On second day we walked, rode a bike through the city and we saw beautiful sightseeings, I was surprised because we could rented a bike on the street. At night we took a taxi and went to Lapa. Lapa is a friendly neighborhood with nightclubs and pubs. We made new friends and we all drank togheter.
The other day was the best day during the trip. We took courage and we jumped paraglaind. The wind was so good the weather so warm. Before we jumped we were afraid of jump, the company and the instructor made us brave and confident, It have been an unbelievable experiencie.
On next morning went to Morro do Pão de Açúcar (Sugarloaf). This is awesome place to visit. We were magnificent with the vision. We could met people from other country, people speaking other language. We spended all morning there. After we came back to the hotel and we went to the beach.
After this morning we came back to home, however, before that a bad situation hapenned. We arrived on the airport and we lost the airplane, so we spended more money and bought others tickets. For me everthing was perfect, I was so happy so I don't care with it.
We came back home, took amazing pictures and colleted great memories. If I could choice anything in this trip, I would spend more days there.
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Some days in Rio de Janeiro
I went to Rio de Janeiro in February, 2016. I was with two friends: Weslley and Larissa.In this trip, on the first day, we went to the beach. The weather was sunny and hot. It was terrific. The sea's water was really warm and salty. This was my first bath in the sea, so I had discomfort in my eyes because salt.
On second day, we walked, road a bike through the city and we saw beautiful sights. I was surprised because we could rent a bike on the street. At night we took a taxi and went to Lapa. Lapa is a friendly neighborhood with nightclubs and pubs. We made new friends and we all drank together.
The next day was the best day of the trip. We found the courage and went parasailing. The wind was so good the weather so warm. Before we jumped we were afraid to jump, the company and the instructor made us brave and confident. It had been an unbelievable experience.
On next morning we went to Morro do Pão de Açúcar (Sugarloaf). This is awesome place to visit. We were amazed by the view. We could meet people from other countries, people speaking other languages. We spent all morning there. After this, we came back to the hotel and we went to the beach.
After this morning we came back to home, however, before that, a bad situation happened. We arrived at the airport and we missed the airplane, so we spent more money and bought others tickets. For me everything was perfect, I was so happy, so I didn't care about it.
We came back home, took amazing pictures and collected great memories. If I could choice anything in this trip, I would spend more days there.
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