Prologue to Rebirth
Daybreak falls with celestial light flooding.
Stars burnt out,
Night is dying.
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In English it is night that falls. Daybreak comes. I tend to associate celestial light with the nighttime light of moon, planets and stars, not with the light of dawn. Best not mix tenses - change burnt(past) to burning (present continuous).
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