Write about my live.
Over the last ten years I have been changed of city. I have been lived in Madrid for ten years and in the year 2008 I come in to Seville. I have been have a children, he is now nine years old. Actually I live in Sevilla, which is a city very funny with a temperate climate in winter and it is very hot in spring and summer, may reach 45 or 50 degrres Celsius. Seville is a very nice city, with great monuments, and with very wonderfull people. If you like Spain you would visit this city, it likes you, I´m sure.
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Write about my life.
Over the last ten years I have moved around. I lived in Madrid for ten years and in the year 2008 I came to Seville. I have a child, he is now nine years old. Actually I live in Sevilla, which is a very funny city with a temperate climate in the winter. It is very hot in the spring and summer, it may reach 45 or 50 degrres Celsius. Seville is a very nice city, with great monuments, and with very wonderfull people. If you like Spain you were to visit this city, you would like it I´m sure.Regards....
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Había algunos errores, pero fueron normales para alguien que hable en tu nivel. Sobre todo eso es buen trabajo.
Ten cuidado con la palabra ´life´ versus ´live.´ ´Life´significa ´vida´mientras que ´live´ significa ´en vivo´
además la palabra "actually" es un falso amigo. No significa "actualmente," pero significa "de veras" o "de verdad" en ingles. En el lugar de "actually" te sugiero que uses "currently" o "right now," como: "right now I now live in Seville"
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Write about my life.
Ten years ago I changed cities. I had lived in Madrid for ten years and in the year 2008 I came to Seville. I had a child, he is now nine years old. I live in Sevilla, which is a very odd city, with a temperate climate in winter and it is very hot in spring and summer, maybe reaching 45 or 50 degrees Celsius. Seville is a very nice city, with great monuments, and with very wonderful people. If you like Spain you should visit this city, it will please you, I´m sure.
Regards....
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