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A busy day Today is a busy day. I got up at 8:30, and then quickly do the washing. It was about 9 o'clock that I left home. After one hour, I arrived in exhibition center located in Nanping of Chongqing, southwest of China. there, thousands of job-seekers were packed into over-crowded recruiting fairs. We walked though the exhibition booth slowly, actually we had to be- people at the site like sardines were packed. It took me about two hours to browse all the recruting booth. Unluckily, still I didn't get a better job. (>﹏<。)~we had a quick lunch to save time for the next appointments with two decoration companies.we discussed our decoration detailes and then chose one of them to decorate our new apartment. Just now, I cooked some noodles for myself. what a tiring day! PS: I'm trying to write article every day to improve my English. hoping you can help me correct. thanks a lot, all of you. Salute

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A busy day

Today is a busy day. I got up at 8:30, and then quickly did the washing. It was about 9 o'clock when I left home. After one hour, I arrived to the exhibition center located in Nanping of Chongqing, southwest of China. there, thousands of job-seekers were packed into over-crowded recruiting fairs. We walked through the exhibition booth slowly, actually we had to be (need re-writing)- people at the site were packed like sardines. It took me about two hours to browse all the recruting booth. Unluckily, still I didn't get a better job.
(>﹏<。)~we had a quick lunch to save time for the next appointments with two decoration companies.we discussed our decoration detailes and then chose one of them to decorate our new apartment. Just now, I cooked some noodles for myself. what a tiring day!
PS: I'm trying to write article every day to improve my English. hoping you can help me correct. thanks a lot, all of you. Salute

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