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Hong Kong SAR China flagHarrus
My working living I have to weak up and go to office at half past seven o'clock from Monday to Friday. Before I go to office, I would have a breakfast first and I would have various food for breakfast like rice, noodle, cookie, and so on. I prefer having cookie for breakfast as it is my favorite food. After my breakfast, I have to go to my office by train, sometimes it would be by bus if I don't have caught the train in time. About my job, I am working in help desk department. I have to answer the question from clients. It is a difficult work for me cause I have to find out solution and explain the reason to the client. Usually, I just need to work for eight hours from Monday to Friday, but there would be exception like colleagues have a sick leave then I would be supposed that increase the working hours. After I come home, I would rather to have a bath and have lunch. I would read some article on internet before I go to bed. That is my working living.

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My working living

I have to weak wake up and go to the office at half past seven o'clock from Monday to Friday. Before I go to the office, I would have a breakfast first and I would have various many different types of food for breakfast like rice, noodles, cookies, and so on. I prefer having cookies for breakfast as it is my favorite food. After my breakfast, I have to go to my office by train, sometimes it would be by bus if I don't have caught catch the train in time. About my job, I am working in help desk department. I have to answer the questions from clients. It is a difficult work for me because I have to find out solutions and explain them reason to the client. Usually, I just need to work for eight hours from Monday to Friday, but there are would be sometimes exceptions like a colleagues have a is sick leave then I would be supposed that increase the working hours have to work longer hours. After I come home, I would rather like to have take a bath and have lunch (dinner? lunch is the meal in the afternoon). I would also read some articles on internet before I go to bed. That is my working living day.


Notes: This is a good entry! I would brush up though on phrasal verbs and articles. Try making a matching game where you have one set of cards with a verb and then other cards with nouns/actions that could complete the phrase. Good luck! 

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My Work Life

I have to wake up and go to my office at half past seven o'clock from Monday to Friday. Before I go to my office, I have breakfast. I would have various food for breakfast like rice, noodles, cookies, and so on. I prefer having a cookie for breakfast as it is my favorite food. After my breakfast, I have to go to my office by train. Sometimes I would go by bus if I don't catch the train in time. At my job, I am working in help desk department. I have to answer questions from clients. It is difficult work for me because I have to find solutions and explain the reasons to the client. Usually, I just need to work for eight hours from Monday to Friday, but there would be exceptions like colleagues have a sick leave then I would be supposed to increase my working hours. After I come home, I would take a bath and eat dinner. I would read some articles on internet before I go to bed. That is my work life. 


Excellent English! I only noticed little mistakes, and overall I was a bit confused by what tense you're writing in. Great entry! 

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