A lost dog!
Julia is a girl who loves to practice sports, travel abroad and taste new kind of food.
Some day Julia was running around the lake at the park, when suddenly she saw a lost dog, it was afraid, pehaps because there were a lot of people in the park.
The dog was walking around the tree, aparentely train to hide it self.
Julia looked around trying to find the owner of that beautiful dog. She approached to the dog and carefully took the dog in her arms and started playing with it.
The dog was so beautiful, it was black with a white circle in one of it's eyes and there was a name in leash.
Julia, looking the dog's leash, remembered when she was a little girl and her dog escaped, she felt sad until her parents found her dog. Because of that, Julia decided to wait in the park hoping that the owner of the dog could find it.
One hour later she heard someone screaming for "Thor", the same name written in the dog's leash. In this moment she breathed in relief because she belived she had found the dog's owner.
She started to walk in direction of this person with the dog in her arms, when the man saw his dog, he opened a big smile and the dog started barking.
They talked for hours and they became friends. Now they go together to the park to practice physical exercises.
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She walked started to walk in his direction of this person with the dog in her arms, . When the man saw his dog them, he opened a big smile and the dog started barking.
They talked for hours and they became friends. Now they (*) go together to the park to practice physical exercises together.
Dicas:
O certo para animal é "it", mas fica melhor, não mais correto, "he" ou "she".
"some day" não dá uma ideia clara de que foi um dia qualquer. Em português seria a mesma coisa; você não diria "algum dia", você diria "um dia" ou "num certo dia", "one day" ou "on a certain day".
Utiliza "always", "sometimes", "usually", "frequently" go to the park... A frase fica mais completa. Se você só falar: "Now they go to the park" parece que eles agora estão indo para o parque como um evento único e não que virou uma rotina.
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A lost dog!
Julia is a girl who loves to practice sports, travel abroad and taste new kind of food.Some One day (better: On a certain day), Julia was running around the lake at the park, when suddenly she saw a lost dog, it. It was afraid, pehaps perhaps because of there were being so many a lot of people in the park.
The dog was walking around the a tree, aparentely apparently train trying to hide it self itself.
Julia looked around trying to find the owner of that beautiful dog. She approached to the dog and carefully took the dog it in her arms and started playing with it.
The It was a dog was beautiful black dog, it was black with a white circle in one of it's its eyes and. Its there was a name was in the leash.
Julia, looking Looking at the dog's leash, Julia remembered when she was a little girl and her dog escaped ran away, how sad she felt sad until her parents found her dog. Because of that, Julia she decided to wait in the park hoping that the owner of the dog could find it.
One hour later she heard someone screaming for "Thor", the same name written in the dog's leash. In At this moment, she breathed in relief because she belived believed (better: knew, realized) the owner had found his dog. she had found the dog's owner.
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