My big family

Hello, my name is Rayniery and having a big family, I live with my mother and two sisters, their names are Any and Teresa. I have a step-brother of my mother, his name is Manuel. My mother and my father are separed (separated) and my father has others(other) children, a baby and a daughter, oooh and a other, his another whose name is Antony and he is 29 years old. My step brother Manuel gets(got) married with to licelot and they have had their first baby, she is a girl and her name is Elisha, and this is my family, what do you think???



one other thing- you should use periods (puntos) instead of commas. Good job!

My big family

Hello.  My name is Rayniery, and I have having a big family.   I live with my mother and two sisters.  Their names are Any and Teresa. I have a step-brother of  from my mother's side.   His name is Manuel. My mother and my father are separated separed, and my father has others children, a baby, a daughter, and one other.   His name is Antony, and he is 29 years old. My step brother Manuel got gets married with Licelot, and they have had their first baby.   It is a girl, and her name is Elisha.   and this is my family, what do you think???

Very nice.  Remember to use punctuation at the end of sentences and within sentences.  Also capitalize the first letter of every sentence.  I removed the text that made this sound like you were talking and not writing.