halloween party I went to halloween party on Monday night. It was really fun , it was first time to go the party since I've been in Australia. I was pretty drunk.. I stayed there till morning. I came

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halloween party I went to halloween party on Monday night. It was really fun , it was first time to go the party since I've been in Australia. I was pretty drunk.. I stayed there till morning. I came home at 6am , I think, I can't remember. I fell asleep all day and woke up at 6pm... haha I felt like wasted my time yesterday. I don't want to think if I had to go work next day. Yesterday is public holiday so.. lucky me!! I slept all day but I could sleep last night usually, I can't understand. My feeing is so fresh today thanks to that. I'm always drunk badly when I go for drink , I need to be careful of it.

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Halloween party

I went to a Halloween party on Monday night. It was really fun; it was the first time I've gone to a party since I've been in Australia. I was pretty drunk.. I stayed there till morning. I came home at 6am, I think. I can't remember. I slept all day and woke up at 6pm... Haha, I feel like I wasted my time yesterday. I don't want to think about what would have happened if I had to go to work yesterday. It was a public holiday so.. lucky me!! I slept all day but I was able to sleep last night usually, I don't understand it. I am feeling really refreshed today thanks to that. I always get really drunk when I go (out) for drink(s) , I need to be careful of that.

Editor's note: Your English is really good! I commend you. There just a few grammatical errors here and there. I also changed some things to make it sound more natural. Some parts were grammatically correct, but sounded awkward and some even sounded almost incorrect. Props to you!

Halloween Party

I went to a Halloween party on Monday night. It was really fun; it was the first time I've been to a party since I was in Australia. I was pretty drunk.. I stayed there till morning. I came home at 6 AM I think. I can't remember. I slept all day and woke up at 6 PM... Haha, I felt like I wasted all my time yesterday. I don't want to think about what would have happened if I had to go work yesterday. It was a public holiday so.. lucky me!!

I slept all day but I could sleep at night like I usually do. I don't understand. I feel fresh today thanks to that.

I'm always drunk badly when I go for drink, I need to be careful of it. When I drink, I always get very drunk. I need to be more careful.

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