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My healthy habits I have healthy habits. I study at home. After I study, I leave for Exercise Academy at 9:30. I exercise hard for 1 hour a day and exercise five times a week. It’s very tired and hard, but exercise make me more healthier. So I have still go to Exercise Academy for 5 years. And I jogging mountain with my mom. When I jogging, I get fresh air that made by trees. So I get healthier than my friends.

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My healthy habits

I have healthy habits.
I study at home. After I study, I leave for the Exercise Academy at 9:30.
I exercise hard for 1 hour a day and exercise five times a week.
It’s very tired tiring and hard, but exercise makes me more healthier. (Or you can say 'makes me more healthy')
So I have to still go to the Exercise Academy for 5 years.
And I go jogging on the mountain with my mom.
When I go jogging, I get fresh air that made by trees.
So I get healthier than my friends.


Well done. :) Very well written.

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My healthy habits  Healthy Habits

I have healthy habits.
I study at home. After I studying, I leave for Exercise Academy at 9:30.
I exercise hard for 1 hour a day and exercise five times a week.
It’s very tired tiring and hard, but exercise makes me more healthier.
So I have still still had to go to Exercise Academy for 5 years.
And I jogging a mountain with my mom. <----- Are you talking plural or singular?
When I jogging, I get fresh air, that made by trees.
So I get become healthier than my friends.


Well written :)

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My healthy habits

I have/lead a  healthy lifestyle. habits.
I study at home. After I have finished my study, I will go to a gym leave for Exercise Academy at 9:30 pm everyday.
I exercise hard for 1 hour daily a day and exercise five times a week.
It’s very tiring and hard but exercise makes me more healthy/ healthier.
So, I am still going to the gym , even after Exercise Academy 5 years of doing it.
And I also like to go jogging in the mountain with my mom.
When I am jogging in the mountain, I can smell the fresh air and the smell of the vegetation. get fresh air that made by trees.
So, I am healthier than my friends.

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