Why happened this to me?
Today I forgot to go to pick up my nice from the school. Her teacher called me an hour after all the kids leve the school, and she said ¨Why haven't come for your kid?, I´m going to leve he with the secretary because I have to go home. I had to run fast (the good thing is that the school is just 10 minutes from my house) but this time I jus made 5 minutes from home to school. When I was there She was lonley and she say....Why are you so late all my friends and my teacher are gonne. It really make me feel bad.
Then when we were at home I realice that my watch was one hour late.....
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Why happened this to me?
Today I forgot to go to pick up my nice niece from the school. Her teacher called me an hour after all the kids leve had left the school, and she said ¨Why haven't you come for your kid?, I´m going to leve leave he her with the secretary because I have to go home. I had to run fast (the good thing is that the school is just 10 minutes from my house) but this time I jus just made it in 5 minutes from home to school. When I was there she was lonley lonely and she say said....Why are you so late, all my friends and my teacher are gonne gone. It really make made me feel bad.Then, when we were at home I realice realized that my watch was one hour late.....
Shouldn't your watch have been one hour early? If it were late, as you say, you would have been at school earlier than usual. Think about it.
Gaby, tu inglés es muy bueno. Es que te distraes un poco y entonces yerras en los tiempos y cosas así. Es muy poca cosa. Si continúas practicando vas a mejorar mucho, pero ponle más atención.
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Why happened this to me?
Today I forgot to go to pick up my nice from the school. Her teacher called me an hour after all the kids had left the school, and she said ¨Why didn't you come for your kid?, I have to take the secretary with me at my home. So, I had to ran fast (the good thing is that the school is just 10 minutes from my house) but this time I just made it in 5 minutes from home to school. When I was there She was lonely and she said....'Why are you so late? All of my friends and my teachers are gone. It really made me feel bad.When we were at home I realize that my watch was one hour late!
Hi, I just try to correct some mistakes, but I am still not sure my corrections are exactly right. I am also English learner here.... If I made any mistake, please don't mind.
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It was an honest mistake. Don't worry too much about it
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