慢跑 （Jogging Part 2)
慢跑的时候，我的身体对我会开始讲。比如，我的腿可能说, “我们真累.”
我的肺脏叫我, “我们需要多空气!” 但是我的咽喉回答, “我不很大，也现在感觉很干燥.”
当我的胃痛了，它一直告诉我应该放慢速度。
我的鼻子常常很高兴，它喜欢闻到很多各种事情。它特别爱雨后的秋叶， 新鲜割草,桉树叶等等。如果它闻到烟，让我知道我应该快走。
我的眼睛享受沿途街景. 汽车疾驶在人行道的旁边。 公园也许就在路的旁边。公园里通常有孩子。年轻的父母喜欢带小孩子去游乐场玩。
如果我不去公园里，没关系。我的眼睛也喜欢看各种的家和花园。
我的耳朵非常警觉，一直听有没有危险。它们讨厌狗的汪汪声音。
有时候我的脑海想的全都是同一首歌或者冥想一点儿。（它不要每个时间听身体的话。）
When jogging, my body will start talking to me. For example, my legs might say, "We're really tired." My lungs call out to me saying, "We need more air!" but my throat replies, "I'm not very big and am also currently feeling very dry." When my stomach hurts, it keeps telling me that I should slow down. My nose is often very happy, it likes to smell a lot of things. It especially loves autumn leaves after the rain, freshly cut grass, eucalyptus leaves and so on. If it smells smoke, it lets me know that I should quickly go away.
My eyes enjoy the scenery along the way. Cars rush by at one side of the side walk. There might be a park next to the road. Parks usually have children in them. Young parents like to take children to the playground to play.
If I don't go to the park, it doesn't matter. My eyes also like to see all kinds of homes and gardens.
My ears are very alert, they're constantly checking if there's any danger around. They hate the sound of dogs barking.
Sometimes my mind is stuck thinking about a song or wanders for a bit. (It does not like listening to the body all the time.)
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慢跑 （Jogging Part 2)
慢跑的时候，我的身体會開始對我說話。比如，我的腿可能會说, “我们很累.”我的肺脏叫喊著, “我们需要更多空气!” 但是我的咽喉回答, “我不很大，現在感觉很干燥.”
当我的胃痛了，它一直告诉我应该放慢速度。
我的鼻子常常很高兴，它喜欢闻各種不同的氣味。它特别爱雨后的秋叶， 割草後散發的青草味,桉树的氣味……等等。如果它闻到烟，它會让我知道我应该快點離開。
我的眼睛享受沿途街景. 汽车疾驶在人行道旁。 路旁也許有個公園。公园里通常有小孩子。年轻的父母喜欢带小孩子去游乐场玩。
如果我不去公园，那也没关系。我的眼睛也喜欢看各种的家和花园。
我的耳朵非常警觉，一直听有没有危险。它们讨厌狗的叫聲。
有时候我的脑海裡充斥著同一首歌或是胡思亂想。（它不要時時刻刻都听身体的话。）
When jogging, my body will start talking to me. For example, my legs might say, "We're really tired." My lungs call out to me saying, "We need more air!" but my throat replies, "I'm not very big and am also currently feeling very dry." When my stomach hurts, it keeps telling me that I should slow down. My nose is often very happy, it likes to smell a lot of things. It especially loves autumn leaves after the rain, freshly cut grass, eucalyptus leaves and so on. If it smells smoke, it lets me know that I should quickly go away.
My eyes enjoy the scenery along the way. Cars rush by at one side of the side walk. There might be a park next to the road. Parks usually have children in them. Young parents like to take children to the playground to play.
If I don't go to the park, it doesn't matter. My eyes also like to see all kinds of homes and gardens.
My ears are very alert, they're constantly checking if there's any danger around. They hate the sound of dogs barking.
Sometimes my mind is stuck thinking about a song or wanders for a bit. (It does not like listening to the body all the time.)
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慢跑 （Jogging Part 2)
慢跑的时候，我的身体会开始与我对话。比如，我的腿可能说, “我们真累.”我的肺脏告诉我, “我们需要多空气!” 但是我的咽喉也说, “我不是很大，但现在感觉很干燥.”
当我的胃开始痛了，它会一直告诉我应该放慢速度。
我的鼻子常常很高兴，它喜欢闻到很多东西。它特别爱雨后的秋叶， 刚刚割下的鲜草，桉树叶等等。如果它闻到烟，它就会让我知道我应该赶快走。
我的眼睛享受沿途街景. 汽车疾驶在人行道的旁边。 公园也许就在路的旁边。公园里通常有孩子。年轻的父母喜欢带小孩子去游乐场玩。
如果我不去公园里，没关系。我的眼睛也喜欢看各种的家和花园。
我的耳朵非常警觉，一直听有没有危险。它们讨厌狗的汪汪声音。
有时候我的脑海想的全都是同一首歌，或者有时也冥想一点儿。（它不会每个时间都听身体的话。）
When jogging, my body will start talking to me. For example, my legs might say, "We're really tired." My lungs call out to me saying, "We need more air!" but my throat replies, "I'm not very big and am also currently feeling very dry." When my stomach hurts, it keeps telling me that I should slow down. My nose is often very happy, it likes to smell a lot of things. It especially loves autumn leaves after the rain, freshly cut grass, eucalyptus leaves and so on. If it smells smoke, it lets me know that I should quickly go away.
My eyes enjoy the scenery along the way. Cars rush by at one side of the side walk. There might be a park next to the road. Parks usually have children in them. Young parents like to take children to the playground to play.
If I don't go to the park, it doesn't matter. My eyes also like to see all kinds of homes and gardens.
My ears are very alert, they're constantly checking if there's any danger around. They hate the sound of dogs barking.
Sometimes my mind is stuck thinking about a song or wanders for a bit. (It does not like listening to the body all the time.)
Interesting essay！I like it！
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慢跑 （Jogging Part 2)
慢跑的时候，我的身体对我会开始讲。比如，我的腿可能说, “我们真累.”我的肺脏叫我, “我们需要多空气!” 但是我的咽喉回答, “我不很大，也现在感觉很干燥.”
当我的胃痛了，它一直告诉我应该放慢速度。
我的鼻子常常很高兴，它喜欢闻到很多各种事情。它特别爱雨后的秋叶， 新鲜割草,桉树叶等等。如果它闻到烟，让我知道我应该快走。
我的眼睛享受沿途街景. 汽车疾驶在人行道的旁边。 公园也许就在路的旁边。公园里通常有孩子。年轻的父母喜欢带小孩子去游乐场玩。
如果我不去公园里，没关系。我的眼睛也喜欢看各种的家和花园。
我的耳朵非常警觉，一直听有没有危险。它们讨厌狗的汪汪声音。
有时候我的脑海想的全都是同一首歌或者冥想一点儿。（它不要每个时间听身体的话。）
When jogging, my body will start talking to me. For example, my legs might say, "We're really tired." My lungs call out to me saying,"We need more air!"
慢跑的时候，我的身体会跟我说话。比如，我的腿可能会说，「我们真的累了！」我的肺脏叫我，「我需要更多的空气！」
but my throat replies, "I'm not very big and am also currently feeling very dry."
但是我的喉咙回答，「我不大，而且我现在很干。」(sorry, why throat not "big"? does it mean thirst?)
When my stomach hurts, it keeps telling me that I should slow down.
当我胃痛时，它告诉我，我应该慢下来。
My nose is often very happy, it likes to smell a lot of things.
我的鼻子常常很高兴，它喜欢闻到各种事物。
It especially loves autumn leaves after the rain, freshly cut grass, eucalyptus leaves and so on. If it smells smoke, it lets me know that I should quickly go away.
它特别喜爱雨后的秋叶，刚割下的草地＼桉树叶等等。如果他闻到烟味，它让我知道应该快步通过。
My eyes enjoy the scenery along the way. Cars rush by at one side of the side walk.
我的眼睛享受沿途的风景，汽车疾驶在人行道的旁边。
There might be a park next to the road. Parks usually have children in them. Young parents like to take children to the playground to play.
那里也许有座公园在路的旁边。公园里通常有孩子。年轻的父母喜欢带孩子去游乐场玩。
If I don't go to the park, it doesn't matter. My eyes also like to see all kinds of homes and gardens.
如果我没有去公园，没有关系。我的眼睛也喜欢看各种家和花园。
My ears are very alert, they're constantly checking if there's any danger around. They hate the sound of dogs barking.
我的耳朵一直警觉，一直听周围有没有危险。他们讨厌汪汪的狗叫声。
Sometimes my mind is stuck thinking about a song or wanders for a bit. (It does not like listening to the body all the time.)
有时候，脑海里想的同样一首歌，或者放空一会儿。 (不要一直听身体的话)
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慢跑 （Jogging Part 2)
慢跑的时候，我的身体会对开始跟我讲话。比如，我的腿可能说, “我们真累.”我的肺会大声跟我,说:“我们需要更多空气!” 但是我的喉咙回答, “我不是很大，现在也感觉很干燥.”
当我的胃痛了，它一直告诉我应该放慢速度。
我的鼻子常常很高兴，它喜欢闻到各种气味。它特别爱雨后的秋叶， 新鲜割草,桉树叶等等。如果它闻到烟，会让我知道我应该快走。
我的眼睛享受沿途街景. 汽车疾驶在人行道的旁边。 公园也许就在路的旁边。公园里通常有孩子。年轻的父母喜欢带小孩子去游乐场玩。
如果我不去公园里，没关系。我的眼睛也喜欢看各种家和花园。
我的耳朵非常警觉，一直听有没有危险。它们讨厌狗的汪汪声音。
有时候我的脑海想的全都是同一首歌或者冥想一点儿。（它不要每个时间听身体的话。）
When jogging, my body will start talking to me. For example, my legs might say, "We're really tired." My lungs call out to me saying, "We need more air!" but my throat replies, "I'm not very big and am also currently feeling very dry." When my stomach hurts, it keeps telling me that I should slow down. My nose is often very happy, it likes to smell a lot of things. It especially loves autumn leaves after the rain, freshly cut grass, eucalyptus leaves and so on. If it smells smoke, it lets me know that I should quickly go away.
My eyes enjoy the scenery along the way. Cars rush by at one side of the side walk. There might be a park next to the road. Parks usually have children in them. Young parents like to take children to the playground to play.
If I don't go to the park, it doesn't matter. My eyes also like to see all kinds of homes and gardens.
My ears are very alert, they're constantly checking if there's any danger around. They hate the sound of dogs barking.
Sometimes my mind is stuck thinking about a song or wanders for a bit. (It does not like listening to the body all the time.)
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