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What do you think about smart homes? In the last decade, we have advanced a lot in new technologies not only for entertainment gadgets but also for making life easier. For example, there are appliances which work themselves like automated vacuum. From my point of view, these advances can be beneficial and bad as well. Some advantages are these gadgets can clean a home in half-hour time while a person spends one or two hours. Nowadays, there is technology to automate, secure and entertain such as gadgets capable to open and close curtain, switch on and off the television and radio, turn light on and off automatically. In addition, we can set the oven about determining hours in order to switch it on or off. Moreover, we can install audio- visual equipment for every room with total access the media. Therefore, they have reduced the time of homework and make life more comfortable. However, everybody can’t afford it. Generally, this new technologies are buying for rich people. The main point is security of homes when they are out. Besides, these appliances are controlled through a mobile app which is installs in our smartphone. Perhaps, this isn’t as secure as we think. The advent of Internet has brought a wide variety of computer virus which can handle any gadget. On the other hand, if we follow to carry on advances in new technology maybe in the future this gadget will be able to control us. Don’t you think?

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What do you think about smart homes?

In the last decade, we have advanced a lot in new technologies, not only for entertainment gadgets but also for making life easier. For example, there are appliances which work by themselves like automated vacuums.

From my point of view, these advances can be beneficial and bad as well. Some advantages are these gadgets can clean a home in a half-hour time while a person spends one or two hours. Nowadays, there is technology to automate, secure and entertain such as gadgets capable to open and close curtains, switch on and off the television and radio, and turn lights on and off automatically. In addition, we can set the oven about determining hours in order to switch it on or off at predetermined hours. Moreover, we can install audio- visual equipment for every room with total access to the media. Therefore, technology has reduced the time of housework and made life more comfortable.
However, not everybody can afford it. Generally, these new technologies are bought by rich people. The main point is security of homes when they are out. Besides, these appliances are controlled through a mobile app which is installed on our smartphone. Perhaps, this isn’t as secure as we think. The advent of Internet has brought a wide variety of computer viruses which can handle any gadget. On the other hand, if we continue to make advances in new technology, maybe in the future one of these gadgets will be able to control us. Don’t you think?


Muy bien escrito Laura, sola pocas sugerencias para mejorarla. Si tienes cualquier duda o pregunta, hazme saber. Saludos 

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