First notebook entry: Introducing myself
About Me
My name is Zeng Huahui.I come frome China.I am a college student.I want to learn English, but my English is very poor.So I want you can improve my English.Thank you.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
About MeMy name is Zeng Huahui. I
** I deleted the "come" away from your second sentence because you are from China and you didn't come from China. The only time you would say "I come from China" is when you are not in China.
** Third sentence, just a small grammar mistake, not a big problem but I added an "a" becuase you are a college student, it makes more sense.
** In the fifth sentence, I took out "you" and "can" because maybe you were referring to yourself about how you want to improve your english. -OR- I wasn't sure if you were asking for help on improving your english.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
About MeMy name is Zeng Huahui.I am from China.I am a college student.I want to learn English, but my English is very poor.So I want to improve my English.Thank you.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
About MeMy name is Zeng Huahui.I come from China.I am a college student.I want to learn English, but my English is very poor.So I want you can improve my English.Thank you.
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