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Happiness What is happiness? Is it money, power or status? Or is it just a cup of tea in a sunny day afternoon or lying in your warm bed when it is cold and pouring rain outside? Happiness can be complex, but it also could be very easy to access. It is obviously that happiness means different things to different people.So what is happiness on earth? In my opinion, happiness is the most fantastic thing you can feel in your heart when something fulfill your demand and makes you satisfied . For example,some people always complain about their life. They think there is still a long distant between them and their causes. They do not feel happy because they consume that the cause is their whole life. They used to overlook the important tings they have such as love from their families and friends. But whatever you success or not, do not forget you could be[ more] happier if you grasp the things you already had. You need to find them and treasure them and do not let it go. Otherwise you maybe regret forever.

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Happiness

What is happiness? Is it money, power or status? Or is it just a cup of tea in on a sunny day afternoon, or lying in your warm bed when it is cold and pouring rain outside? Happiness can be complex, but it also could be very easy to find/define/access.
It is obviously that happiness means different things to different people. So what on earth* is happiness [on earth]? In my opinion, happiness is the most fantastic thing you can feel in your heart when something fulfils your wishes/needs/desires/[demands] and makes you feel satisfied .
For example, some people always complain about their life. They think there is still [a long distancet between them and their ambitions/causes]/a long way to go to achieve their dreams/fulfil their aspirations/ambitions. They do not feel happy, because they consume that let/allow their cause to [consume]/take over their (whole) life/[the cause is]/their ambitions are their whole life. They used to overlook the important things they have, such as love from/the love of their families and friends.
But whatever you achieve/succeedss or not, do not forget you could be more happyier if you grasp the things you already haved. You need to find them, and treasure/cherish them, and (do) not let them it go. Otherwise you maybe regret forever.

* If you use the expression  'what on earth . . ?'  before the question, you are emphasising [placing importance on] the question ;  however, if you use it after, as you have done, it does not do this, but is understood literally - 'what is happiness [in our life] on earth ?'

A good argument, well presented.

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