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Diary entry for October 30th After lunch,I washed my clothes by hands.It was so cold to touch the tap water!!!But I don't like washing clothes by washing machine.I think it is easier to damage the clothes. However,sometimes I have to use washing machine.For example,when I wash the bedclothes.It's so big that I can't wash it by my hands. In all,this is an ordinary day!!

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Hi Dahlia, 'In all, this is an ordinary day!' sounds great and I do not think you should change it. But I want you to know there are several ways to say this: All in all, this is an ordinary day! Just an ordinary day! A day like any other day!
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Diary entry for October 30th

After lunch, I washed my clothes by hands. It was so cold to touch the tap water!!!But I don't like washing clothes by in a washing machine. I think it is easier to damage the clothes.
However, sometimes I have to use a washing machine. For example, when I wash the bedclothes. It's They're so big that I can't wash it them by my hands.
In all, this is an ordinary day!!

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