The topic: what happened when I met my clon
One day I saw the girl walking the street. Her appearance was the same as mine. I came up to her. She was very surprised to see me. We knew each other. The names were similar too.
From her parents we learned that she was adopted and she was my clone. We decided to find out more.
Of course, in the center of cloning nobody sad anything. We decided to get into the center secretly. We came to the center and hid utility room. In the evening when everyone went home, we entered into the room with the archive.
It turned out that in this center cloning was performed 1 time. It was my new sister’s clone. We stole documents from the center and decided to tell reporters.
After the publicity people condemned doctors. And we became popular. We interviewed and get money for it.
We was studied the doctors and got many also.
Besides similarity our inner world was the same too. We liked the same food, clothing and boys.We fell asleep and woke up at the same moment. We were so good together. We did not know we can have our families in the future. Why we had the same name we didn’t figure out.
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The topic: what happened when I met my clone
One day I saw a girl walking the street. Her appearance was the same as mine. I came up to her. She was very surprised to see me. We knew each other. The* names were similar too.From her parents we learned that she was adopted and she was my clone. We decided to find out more.
Of course, in the center of cloning nobody said anything. We decided to get into the center secretly. We came to the center and hid in the utility room. In the evening when everyone went home, we entered into the room with the archive.
It turned out that in this center cloning was performed 1 time. It was my new sister’s clone. We stole documents from the center and decided to tell reporters.
After the publicity people condemned the doctors. And we became popular. We held interviews and got money for it.
We were studied by the doctors and got money from them, also.
Besides our outward similarity our inner world was the same too. We liked the same food, clothing and boys.We fell asleep and woke up at the same moment. We were so good together. We did not know we can have our families in the future. Why we had the same name we couldn’t figure out.
*or, our names..
Very well written! One - c'est bonne, two - twice as nice.
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The topic: what happened when I met my clone
One day I saw the a girl walking down the street. Her appearance was the same as mine. I came up to her. She was very surprised to see me. We knew each other. The names were similar too.From her parents we learned that she was adopted and she was my clone. We decided to find out more.
Of course, in the center of cloning (we would probably say 'Cloning Center' if that is its official name) nobody sad anything. We decided to get into the center secretly. We came to the center and hid in the utility room. In the evening, when everyone went home, we entered into the room with the archive (again, we would probably say 'archive room').
It turned out that in this center, cloning had only been performed once was performed 1 time. We were it. It was my new sister’s clone. We stole the documents from the center and decided to tell reporters.
After the publicity, people condemned the doctors involved. And wWe became popular. We interviewed did interviews and get got money for it.
We was were studied by the doctors and got many also. (Got many what?)
Besides the outer similarity, our inner world was the same too. We liked the same food, clothing and boys. We fell asleep and woke up at the same moment. We were so good together. We did not know we can have our families in the future (I don't know what you're trying to say in this sentence). Why we had the same name We didn’t figure out why we had the same name.
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