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It's hard to lose weight Recent days ,i have found that i'm getting fatter,and many clothes don't fit me anymore, that makes me so depressed that i started to figure out what happened to me. First,maybe is my young sister take away my dog,so i don't need to walk the dog twice a day,don't need to play with he.Second,i often too late too eat dinner,damn,i eat so much in dinner.Third,i have stop exercise yoga twice a week. So i try to eat less and exercise more ,maybe go to gym every two days,now i feel more depresse now .

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It's hard to lose weight

Recently, I have found that I'm getting fatter and many clothes don't fit me anymore. That makes me so depressed that I started to think about why it has happened to me.
First, maybe it's because my young sister took away my dog. Now I don't need to walk the dog twice a day,m or play with him. Second, I often eat dinner too late that. Damn, I eat so much dinner. Third, I have stopped doing yoga twice a week.

So I will to eat less and exercise more  and maybe go to gym every two days. I feel more depressed now.


Note: some were grammar corrections and some were to make the sentences sound more natural in English.

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It's hard to lose weight

Recently days , I have found out that I'm getting fatter, and many of my clothes don't fit on me anymore. that makes This made me so depressed that I started to figure out what happened to me.
First, maybe my younger sister take took away my dog, so I don't no longer needed to walk the dog twice a day, don't need to and play with hehim. Second, I often too late too eat dinner  eat dinner too late; damn, I eat so muchr. Third, I have stopped exercising yoga twice a week.
So I try to eat less and exercise more, maybe go to gym every two days, and now i feel more depressed now.

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