Could you check and fix my sentences to use in daily life? Situation&gt; 6) a: Why can't I go there? b: You're age of 12 and over age of 15 are allowed to get in. a: No,!!! I really want to go in!!

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Taesik Yun

Could you check and fix my sentences to use in daily life? Situation> 6) a: Why can't I go there? b: You're age of 12 and over age of 15 are allowed to get in. a: No,!!! I really want to go in!! 7) a: Why can't I ask her out? b: Don't you know she has a boyfriend? a: So what? What is that important? b: Her boyfriend is Bred! That's important! 8) a: Why bother? You do your work! b: I'm just helping you! a: I don't need your help. Leave me alone! 9) a: Why not use this screwdriver to fix that? b: Good! Give it to me! Um,,, nice tool.

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Could you check and fix my sentences to use in daily life?

Situation>

6)
a: Why can't I go in there?
b: You're age of 1212 years old and only kids over the age of 15 are allowed to getgo in. (You can use "get" here, but "go" is better)
a: No,!!! I really want to go in!!

7)
a: Why can't I ask her out?
b: Don't you know she has a boyfriend?
a: So what? WhatWhy is that important?
b: Her boyfriend is Bred (lol, strange name)! That's important! (why is it important?)

8)
a: Why bother? You do your own work!
b: I'm just helping you!
a: I don't need your help. Leave me alone!

9)
a: Why not use this screwdriver to fix that?
b: Good! Give it to me! Um,,, nice tool. (lol)

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