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An addiction on cellphone I kept my cellphone around me all the time, and checked for missed calls and texts in 10 minutes . Today I left it at home and felt uneasy all day till came home from work. Maybe I have became too depend on it. From now on I will set the time limit on cellphone usage. it is because recently I lost track of time and ruined impotant matters I should have done it.please snap out of it.

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An addiction on to cellphones

I kept my cellphone around me all the time, and checked for missed calls and texts in every 10 minutes (This is not incorrect, but it is more natural to say: I keep my cellphone around me at all times, and check for missed call and texts every 10 minutes) .

Today, I left it at home and felt uneasy all day till until I came home from work. (till is very informal, and is not generally used in written language. It is sometimes used if the writer is writing is a specific dialect, such as a rural, southern American dialect ).

Maybe I have became become too depend on it.

From now on, I will set the a time limit on cellphone usage.

It it is because recently I lost track of time and ruined impotant important matters I should have done it. (This sentence is  confusing, but I understand the meaning)

You could say:  Because I recently lost track of time, I neglected ( you could also say forgot about) important matters I shouldn't have. This sentence would also be better placed before: From now on, I will set a time limit on cellphone usage.

please snap out of it. (Again, this sentence is a little confusing because it is a command, and would only make sense if this was for someone else.) You could say: I really need to snap out of it. Make sure to include yourself as the subject. 


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Thanks for correcting it. It helps me a lot.
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An addiction to cellphone X  > Addicted to my cellphone.

I keep my cellphone around me all the time, and check for missed calls and text messages in every 10 minutes .But today I left it at home and felt uneasy all day till I got/came/ home from work. Maybe I have become too dependant on it. From now on, I will set a the time limit on  for it's usage, it is because I have  recently I lost track of my time and ruined some important matters. I should have done it earlier.please I have to snap out of it.
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An addiction TO - http://www.oxfordlearnersdictionaries.com/definition/english/addiction?q=addiction

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