Oct 27th, 2016
After school, I went hang out with my friends. We went to a fancy gelato shop where my friend wanted to go, and ate some gelato. It was so good and looked cute, because It looked like a flower. However, I chose some flavor that I just wanted to eat, so actually my gelato looked not as good as a picture.
Then, we went to buy costumes for Halloween. My friend bought kind of a witch costume, but I didn't buy anything. Because I would rather look than wear.
My school has a costume content for Halloween, so I'm looking forward to seeing it.
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Oct 27th, 2016
After school, I went hung out with my friends. We went to a fancy gelato shop that my friend wanted to go to, and ate some gelato. It was so really good and looked cute, because It looked like a flower. However, I just chose some flavor that I just wanted to eat, so actually my gelato did not look as good as in the picture.Then, we went to buy costumes for Halloween. My friend bought a kind of a witch costume, but I didn't buy anything. Because I would rather look at costumes than wear them.
My school has a costume contest for Halloween, so I'm looking forward to seeing it.
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Oct 27th, 2016
After school, hung out with my friends. We went to a fancy gelato shop that my friend wanted to go to, and we ate some gelato. It was so good and looked cute, because It looked like a flower. However, I chose a flavor that I just wanted to eat, so in the end my gelato didn't look as good as the picture.("in the end" is a very natural way to describe how something turned out, very useful phrase.)
Then, we went to buy costumes for Halloween. My friend bought kind of a witch costume, but I didn't buy anything, because I would rather look than wear.
("Because" connects sentences, but you don't usually start a sentence with "Because")
My school has a costume contest for Halloween, so I'm looking forward to it.
Your English is very good, and I have no trouble understanding you, but it sometimes isn't very natural. English is very hard to master though, so your doing really well :) がんばって！
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