Today in japan
Today is rain day.
It is heavy rain now.
But I must go to work.
Have a good day.
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Original Post:
Today in japan
It is heavy rain now.
But I must go to work.
Have a good day.
Corrected:
Today it is raining heavily. However, I must go to work.
Have a good day.
Notes: If you want to put a title use the date because treating this entry as part of a journal or letter will indicate each entry is for that specific day!
So, not "Today in Japan", use " October 27, 2016"
That is why I did not include the title.
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For the first sentence I would say "Today it is raining" or "Today is a rainy day".
For the second sentence either "It is raining heavily now" or "The rain is heavy now" would be better.
The last two sentences are good. I was taught in school to never start a sentence with a conjunction (but, and, etc.) but plenty of people speak and write that way so it's probably fine. Have a good day!
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