unbelieve i still live
Nowadays,it is autumn,so the weather is cold.And I have a bad cold so that I feel uncomfortable.
When I was walking alone,the strong autumn wind passed me.I was getting cold feet.In crunch time, Ii really wanted a superman comes there.
In that distant place,there was a hubbub.i can't control my feeling and think a precept that don't walk alone when the sky being dark.
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Unbelievable that I still live.
Now it is autumn, so the weather is cold. And I have a bad cold so that I feel uncomfortable.When I was walking alone, the strong autumn wind passed me. I was getting cold feet. In crunch time, I really wanted a superman to come here.
In that distant place there was a hubbub. I can't control my feeling and think about the rule not to walk alone when the sky is dark.
Very well written!
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