a winter's afternoon
Winter had come unconsciously. I stayed in the air-conditioned room all the afternoon, not wanting to do anything. I lay in a lounge, with my feet feeling so cold. I didn't know what could I do. When I almost fell asleep, Wang came in and told me that there was someone to meet me.
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Hello Tony! Here's my correction for you.
A winter's afternoon
Winter had come unconsciously (? what do you mean? unnoticed? ). I stayed was staying in an air-conditioned room all the afternoon, not willing to do anything. I lay was lying in a lounge, with my feet feeling so cold. I didn't know what I could do. When I almost fell asleep, Wang came in and told me that there was someone to meet me.Want to progress faster?
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