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Getting weight. I have gained weight recently. When I looked at me through the mirror, it looked like I got some weight, so I weighted and found that I got around three pounds. I believed that it must be from the trip I did a week ago with my friends. I visited China and stayed for a week there and ate a lot of foods offered to us. It was not easy for us to refuse foods we had from people we met. I should excise everyday hard from today. I hope to get back in shape soon like before.

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Gaining weight.

I have gained weight recently.
When I looked at myself in the mirror, it looked like I had put on/gained some weight. So, I weighed myself and found that I had put on/had gained around three pounds. I think that it must be from the trip I went on a week ago with my friends. We visited China and stayed for a week there and ate a lot of the foods that were offered to us. It was not easy for us to refuse food from the people we met. From today onwards, I shall exercise hard everyday. I hope to get back in shape soon, like I was before.
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Gaining weight.

I have gained weight recently.

When I looked at me through myself in the mirror, it looked like I got had gained some weight, so I weighted weighed myself and found that I got had gained around three pounds. I believed that think it must be from the trip I did a week ago with my friends. I We visited China, and stayed there for a week, there and ate a lot of the foods offered to us. It was not easy for us to refuse foods we had from people we met. I should exercise everyday from now on hard from today. I hope to get back in shape soon like before.


For the last two sentences, we use "from now on" to describe things that change as soon as possible. e.g. "I have been a smoker my whole life, but I've decided I won't smoke from now on"

With the last sentence, the use of "back in shape" already implies "like before" with the word "back", so you don't need to say it.

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