Three advantages of studying abroad (I'm always confused with the tense...pls help me out)
In my opinion, there are three advantage of studying abroad.
First of all,you can learn more about a new language. Studying abroad forces you to speak a language that you aren't familiar with because it just leaves you surrounded with the foreign circumstances. However, owning a new foreign language skill always winds up making you more competitive in the business market, which means that it makes you remarkable comparing to those who only speak their mother languages.
Secondly, you will become more independent. When staying abroad on your own, you (will) need to approach whatever means can make you survive, and to conquer the physical and mental difficulty to move on. For examples, you may have to learn how to cook, how to pay your rental fee alone, and how to social.
The last but not the least, you will widen your horizon. If you have never been to any other countries, you will be constrained to learn more information and to think in a limited way. Under such the condition is detrimental to your future and kills the best person you might be in the future.
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Three advantages of studying abroad (I'm always confused with the tense...pls help me out)
In my opinion, there are three advantages of studying abroad.First of all,you can learn more about a new language. Studying abroad forces you to speak a language that you aren't familiar with because it just leaves you surrounded with the foreign circumstances. However, owning a new foreign language skill always winds up making you more competitive in the business market, which means that it makes you remarkable comparing to those who only speak their mother languages.
Secondly, you will become more independent. When staying abroad on your own, you (will) need to approach whatever means can make you survive, and to conquer the physical and mental difficulty to move on. For examples, you may have to learn how to cook, how to pay your rental fee alone, and how to socialize.
The Last but not least, you will widen your horizons. If you have never been to any other countries, you will be constrained to learn more information and to think in an unlimited way. Under such conditions it is detrimental to your future and kills the best person you might be in the future.
Good work! "Last but not least" is a saying that is basically always used without modifying it, so I wouldn't switch it up. Your word choice with "kills" in the last sentence is a little dramatic, but nonetheless, good work! When using numbers in this context, you use ordinal numbers, (first, second, third, fourth, fifth, sixth. The first three are the only ones that have a weird ending, every other one ends in -th.) Also, the saying "widening your horizons" or "they are widening their horizons" is always plural. It doesn't really have a hard and fast rule. Great work!
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I only read it quickly, but I did not see any obvious problems with the tense - it seems fine.
There were some other minor mistakes, but overall you wrote well.
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