My College
My college is an old school about 100years. It has a lot of old trees along the road. In summer, there have no sunshine and very beautiful. My college lies in Shanghai which is a modern city, the people live in here are all motivated.I like this feel, I want to be a motivated people. What's more, Shanghai has more opportunity in my field, so I can choose a good job which Hefei can not serve to me. I like Shanghai more than Hefei given to this reason. But the house and car is all expensive than Hefei, if I want to live in Shanghai I have to burden huge pressure. If I want to live a easy and comfortble life, Hefei will be the good choice.
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My College
My college is an old school, about 100 years old. It has a lot of old trees along the road. In summer, there is much sunshine and it is very beautiful. My college lies in Shanghai which is a modern city. The people who live here are all motivated. I like this feeling and I want to be a motivated person. What's more, Shanghai has more opportunities in my field, so I can choose a good job which Hefei cannot give me. I like Shanghai more than Hefei given this reason. But the house and car in Shanghai are more expensive than in Hefei. If I want to live in Shanghai I will be burdened by huge pressures. If I want to live an easy and comfortable life, Hefei will be the better choice.Very well written!
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