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Are these sentence correct? Mobile phone which was stealed yesterday is whose? 手机昨天偷走了是谁的? How can find a cheap renthouse? 怎么能找着便宜房租? Would you please take off your hat? 请你摘下了你的帽子吗? If you want to improve, what should you do? 也许想提高, 要作什么? Have you ever climb a long path on mountain? 你以前坐过长途爬山吗? Have you ever had a hard goodbye? 你以前有过一难告别吗? Who was called by broadcast? 广播里在点名谁 ? You decided how to go from Tehran to Mashhad ? 从Tehran到Mashhad你选择怎么作? After the train started to move what can you do? 火车开了以后你可以作什么? Looking outside window in train, what did you see? 在火车看看窗外你看了什么?

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Are these sentence correct?

Mobile phone which was stealed yesterday is whose?
昨天誰的手機被偷了？
How can find a cheap renthouse?
怎樣能找着房租更便宜的地方?
Would you please take off your hat?
可以请您脫帽吗?
If you want to improve, what should you do?
也许想更精進, 那麼你應該多作些什么準備?
Have you ever climb a long path on mountain?
你以前有花時間登山吗?
Have you ever had a hard goodbye?
你以前有过離別的經驗?
Who was called by broadcast?
广播里在叫谁 ?
You decided how to go from Tehran to Mashhad ?
你如何从Tehran到Mashhad?
After the train started to move what can you do?
火车已經出發，你還能怎麼辦?
Looking outside window in train, what did you see?
瞧瞧火车窗外，你發現了什么?
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Are these sentence correct?

Mobile phone which was stealed yesterday is whose?
手机昨天偷走了是谁的? 
正确：昨天被偷走的手机是谁的？
解释：was stealed 被偷走  被动语态。
How can find a cheap renthouse?
怎么能找着便宜房租?
正确：怎么（才）能找到朋友的出租房。
解释：房租是 renthouse charge。
Would you please take off your hat?
请你摘下了你的帽子吗?
正确：请你摘下你的帽子，好吗？
解释：“请”和“吗”不能一起用。

If you want to improve, what should you do?
也许想提高, 要作什么?
正确：如果你想要提高，你应该做什么？
解释：if：如果 
            maybe：也许

Have you ever climb a long path on mountain?
你以前坐过长途爬山吗?

 你曾经在山上爬过长长的路吗？

Have you ever had a hard goodbye?
你以前有过一难告别吗?

你以前有过难舍难分的告别吗?
hard goodbye（？）


Who was called by broadcast?
广播里在点名谁 ?
正确：广播里被叫的是谁？

You decided how to go from Tehran to Mashhad ?
从Tehran到Mashhad你选择怎么作?
正确：你决定怎么从tehran 去mashhad了吗？

After the train started to move what can you do?
火车开了以后你可以作什么?
正确：火车开了以后，你可以做什么?
解释：作业，作文，作家。
            do=做，做+sth。

Looking outside window in train, what did you see?
在火车看看窗外你看了什么?

在火车看窗外你看到了什么? （better）  
or： 从火车看窗外，你看到了什么？

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Are these sentence correct?

Mobile phone which was stealed yesterday is whose?
手机昨天被偷走的了手机是谁的?
How can find a cheap renthouse?
怎么才能找着便宜的出租房租?
Would you please take off your hat?
请你摘下了你的帽子吗?
If you want to improve, what should you do?
也许如果你想提高, 你应该做要作什么?
Have you ever climb a long path on mountain?
你曾经在山上爬过很长一段路吗？以前坐过长途爬山吗?
Have you ever had a hard goodbye?
你以前曾经有过一难过的告别吗?
Who was called by broadcast?
广播里在点名谁的名?
You decided how to go from Tehran to Mashhad ?
从Tehran到Mashhad你选择怎么作走?
After the train started to move what can you do?
火车开了以后你可以作做什么?
Looking outside window in train, what did you see?
在火车看看火车的窗外，你看到了什么?

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Are these sentence correct?

Mobile phone which was stealed yesterday is whose?
昨天偷走了的手机是谁的?
How can find a cheap renthouse?
怎么能找着便宜房租的房子?
Would you please take off your hat?
请你摘下你的帽子可以吗?
If you want to improve, what should you do?
如果你想提高,你 要做什么?
Have you ever climb a long path on mountain?
你以前长途爬山过吗?
Have you ever had a hard goodbye?
你以前有过一段艰难告别吗?
Who was called by broadcast?
广播里在点名谁 ?
You decided how to go from Tehran to Mashhad ?
从Tehran到Mashhad你选择怎么走?
After the train started to move what can you do?
火车开了以后你可以做什么?
Looking outside window in train, what did you see?
看看火车窗外你看到了什么?
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Are these sentence correct?

Mobile phone which was stealed yesterday is whose?
昨天被偷走了手机是谁的?
How can find a cheap renthouse?
怎么能找着便宜的出租房?
Would you please take off your hat?
可以请你摘下你的帽子吗?
If you want to improve, what should you do?
如果你想要提高,你应该 要做什么?
Have you ever climb a long path on mountain?
你以前在山上爬过这么长的路吗?
Have you ever had a hard goodbye?
你以前有过不舍的告别吗?
Who was called by broadcast?
广播里谁被点名?
You decided how to go from Tehran to Mashhad ?
从Tehran到Mashhad你选择怎么去？
After the train started to move what can you do?
火车开了以后你可以做什么?
Looking outside window in train, what did you see?
看看火车的窗外，你看到了什么?

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