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Study Plan
(Application of Student Visa to study in New Zealand)
I believe that this study plan, submitted as an application for a student visa to study in New Zealand’s University of Auckland, can provide you with an outline of my plan for doctoral study in New Zealand and subsequent career development in China.
Personal status
I am Junye Dong, male, born on May.3rd of 1987 in Shanxi Province. To realize my dream of becoming an excellent engineer, I chose to pursue professional knowledge in Materials Science and Engineering in Hefei University of Technology in September 2005. After four years of undergraduate study specializing in Material Processing, I received a Bachelor’s Degree in Engineering. I did well in my undergraduate study and my overall average score is above 82.In September 2009, I entered into Northwestern Polytechnical University as a Master student and worked very hard in The State Key Laboratory on solidification, a very famous lab in material field in China.
During my four years of undergraduate study, I took several core Subjects related to Materials Engineering, and after nearly two years of graduate study, I acquired relevant research experience and developed a strong research interest in material science. I am confident that all of these relevant experiences will contribute positively to my Ph.D study at The University of Auckland.
The reasons I wish to study at The University of Auckland, as a doctoral student in the Faculty of Engineering
The University of Auckland is a world-famous university with intelligent students and professional staff and faculty, who are devoted to high-quality teaching and research. Over its 150-year history, it has grown into one of the world's best universities and now ranks among the world's top 70. Accordingly, it plays a vital role in the cultural, social, and economic development of the region. The University of Auckland has also strengthened and increased its international links with numerous foreign institutions, and every year it attracts thousands of students from all over the world. This distinctive university is a place where students can interact with one another and their professors on a daily basis, and is an important, respected centre of learning and research, enhancing knowledge, creation, and innovation in the engineering area. I believe that studying at such a well-known university is the best way to realize my dream of becoming an outstanding engineer.
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After reading several papers by Mr.Wei Gao, a professor of Materials Science and Engineering at The University of Auckland, I was touched by his profound knowledge and innovative viewpoint, then applied for doctoral program under his guidance. Finally I was given the chance to study in the Faculty of Engineering. This Faculty at The University of Auckland is considered the best in New Zealand and offers exciting opportunities for Ph.D studies. My future supervisor,Prof.Wei Gao, an outstanding scientist, will provide me with full financial support and close supervision during my study.
My overall educational goal
I hope I can become a distinguished engineer and researcher after successfully finishing my doctoral degree at The University of Auckland-.My academic goals include:acquiring advanced research skills and communication methodologies, following the latest developments in the international academic community and developing the ability of independent research, I also desire to improve personality which will allow me to enter society with full confidence upon my graduation. If I have the opportunity to study at The University of Auckland, I am confident I can achieve my goal by the time I complete my degree.
My reasons to return to China after graduation/completing my degree:
There are several reasons why I decide to return to China after graduation. The most important one is my family. I love my parents and brother. They always care so much about me and provide considerate help and support. I plan to repay my parents with my outstanding achievements and live with them for the rest of their lives. Sharing every step of my life with my dear parents is an achievement. Additionally, China’s governmental policy is attractive to me. The government has invested a lot of money in state research recently, and the input is increasing every year. Material research and development have become an emphasis, and Chinese scientists have begun to make a number o
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