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Some people prefer to live in small town, others prefer to live in a big city. Deciding where to live is the first choice people should make in order to build their own life.while both small town and big city have advantages , I believe that city's life is more beneficial.This is due to the fact of greater academic, social and health opportunities. In fact, the city offers prestigious school, where the teachers are qualified. As a result,the student get the chance to elaborate his learning skills in different fields with a high level. As an exempel from my country Tunisia , student if the capital get the most excellent score in the national exam than town's student . From another perspective, as the big city contain a diversity of people , the social life is interesting and productive . the person ,daily contacts people with different thoughts which plays an important role in his personality building. For a example , when I migrate from tunisia 's south to the capital , my communication skills enhanced and my ability to accept the others improved . even my family and friends notice the positive changes . In addition, one of the most important fact of a comfortable life is the health care . As the city has the biggest number of people , sophisticated hospital are lacoted there. Also , qualified doctors works there. As an exemple, to make a complicated surgery citizen should travel from the south to the capital Tunisia . To conclude , taking the choice to live in a big city is a game changer of person's future .

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Some people prefer to live in small town, others prefer to live in a big city.

Deciding where to live is the first choice people should make in order to build their own life. While both small town and big city have advantages , I believe that city life is more beneficial. This is because it has greater academic, social and health opportunities.
In fact, the city offers prestigious schools, where the teachers are qualified. As a result, the student gets the chance to elaborate his learning skills in different fields with a high level. As an example from my country Tunisia , students in the capital get a better result in the national exam than student in other towns..
From another perspective, as the big city is cosmopolitan the social life is interesting and productive, the daily contact with people of different opinions also plays an important role in personality building. For a example , when I migrated from Tunisia 's south to the capital, my communication skills enhanced and my ability to accept others improved . even my family and friends noticed the positive changes .
In addition, one of the most important factors of a comfortable life is health care . As the city has the biggest number of people , sophisticated hospitals are located there. Also , qualified doctors work there. As an example, to undergo complicated surgery a citizen should travel from the south to the capital Tunisia .
To conclude, choosing to live in a big city is a game changer for one's future .

Very well written!

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