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Some Advice for College's Students (Help me with this please =D) Many teenagers who finish school decide to study in college. Although, not all of them are ready to this new challenge. As a result, they end up dropping out from college. This text will give some pieces of advice that will help students deal with college. First of all, the number of courses that undergraduates take up in one semester could determine whether they pass all their courses or fail at least one of them. The experience that students had on the first semester has to help them in deciding how many courses would be recommendable to take in the following semesters. One other problem that many people complain about, and students are not the exception, is the lack of time. That is why organizing better the schedule could also be essential for the student. Furthermore, avoiding having a big gap between two classes could be helpful. By doing this, undergraduates will be able to do extra-curriculum activities such as practicing a sport or taking up music classes. On the other hand, some careers involve many areas in which graduates can work. Because of this, it is necessary for undergraduates to research information about their careers so that they get to know better them. They should start looking for information on their college. Different events, hosted by colleges, allow them to know in which area they want to specialize in the future. Apart from that, the job market could be really hard for an undergraduate without experience. If the student does not want to have this problem in the future, he or she has to do some work which have to be related to their career. In addition, going to some conferences that keep them up with the last topics will be useful for their curriculum. By following those pieces of advice, students will be able to have a better stay in college. Besides, it will provide them with tools that help them cope with some future issues.

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Some Advice for College Students (Help me with this please =D)

Many teenagers who finish school decide to study in college. Not all of them, though, are ready to this new challenge. As a result, they end up dropping out. This text will give some advice to help students deal with college.

First of all, the number of courses that undergraduates take up in one semester could determine whether they pass all their courses or fail some. Students' experiences from their first semester can help them decide how many courses would be optimal* in the following semesters. One other problem that many people complain about, and students are no exception, is lack of time. That is why organizing better the schedule could also be essential for the student. Furthermore, avoiding having a big gap between two classes could be helpful. By doing this, undergraduates can do extra-curricular activities such as sport or music classes.

On the other hand, some careers involve many areas in which graduates can work. Thus it is necessary for undergraduates to research information about their careers so that they get to know them better. They should start looking for information about their college. Different events, hosted by colleges, help them know where they want to specialize later. Apart from that, the job market could be really hard for an undergraduate without experience. If the student does not want to have this problem in the future, he or she has to do some work which has to be related to their career. In addition, going to some conferences that keep them up with the last topics will be useful for their curriculum.

By following those pieces of advice, students will be able to have a better stay in college. Also it will provide them with tools that help them cope with some future issues.

*or, wise

Very well written!

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Some Advice for College's Students (Help me with this please =D)

Many teenagers who finish school decide to study in college. However, not all of them are ready for this new challenge. As a result, they end up dropping out of college. I will give some advice to help students go through college.

First of all, the number of courses that undergraduates take in one semester could determine whether they pass all their courses or fail some. Students' experiences during the first semester can help them determine how many courses they should take for the next semester. One other problem that many people complain about, and students are not the exception, is lack of time. That is why organizing the schedule better could be essential for students. If undergraduates avoid having a big gap between two classes, they will be able to do extracurricular activities such as sport or music classes.

Some careers provide many different areas in which graduates can work. For this reason, it is necessary for undergraduates to research about their careers so they get to know them better. They should start looking for information on their college. Also, attending different college events will allow them to explore what they want to specialize in for their future. Finding a job in the current job market could be very difficult for an undergraduate without experience. However, if students do not want to have this problem in the future, they have to work in field related to their career. Additionally, going to conferences that keep them up-to-date with current topics will be useful for their curriculum.

By following these set of advice, students will have a better experience and enable themselves to overcome future issues in college.


Sorry for all the corrections. You did well either way. Even in college, a lot of my peers would get a lot more corrections and they're native in English. So do not feel discouraged :)

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