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Tomorrow is Valentine's Day.Tom wants to date with Amy.He makes a firm resolution to ask her out.Surprisedly,she acceptes it,and appointe 8 PM at seafood restaurant.From he wakes up next day,he begins to select
clothes,shoes and bag,and go to hairdresser to have good hair cut.Until 6 PM,Tom'mother asks him if he finished the homework.Tom responsess diffidently"No".Tom's mother is so angry and asks him can't go out until he finishes the homework.But Tom'homework is too much that he can't complete it,so he decideds to dial Amy'cell phone number,asks her if they can date next time.Amy hands up immediately,and swears inside that she never makes the appointment with Tom anymore.
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Tomorrow is Valentine's Day.Tom wants a date with Amy. He makes a firm resolution to ask her out. Surprisingly, she accepts it, and they agree to meet at 8 PM at a seafood restaurant. From the time he wakes up next day, he begins to select clothes, shoes and a bag, and goes to the hairdresser to have good hair cut. At 6 PM, Tom's mother asks him if he finished his homework.Tom responds diffidently"No". Tom's mother is so angry and asks she tells him he can't go out until he finishes his homework. But Tom'homework is too much Tom has so much homework that he can't complete it, so he decides to dial Amy's cell phone number, and ask her if they can have a date another time. Amy hangs up immediately, and swears inside that she will never agree to a date with Tom again.Very nice!
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