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A trip to Australia Hello, allow me to introduce myself My name is Frederic. I would ask you to tell me if my English language could be clear enough. I mean for Australian people. I'm going to leave France to go to Australia on February and even if I know I need more practice I would be glad to know that I might be understood. I'm going to Australia for one year to make both a trip and work. I would like to discover that beautiful island by trough the whole of countries. I would like to meet lots of people and their culture and obviously meet incredible animals such as kangaroos or koalas as well ! To do that I already have bought my working holiday visa. Which one permit me to work in that country during six months and also take a rest during the next months ! I'm a photographer, so I think it'll be a great experience in term of discovery. Over the night I often dream about these wonderful landscapes. I've been already visited many countries over the world, but it's the first time so far ! I'll visit to start the biggest cities such as Sydney, Melbourne, Cairns and also Adelaide and Brisbane and then take some rest in the largest Desert (Victoria) of the territory for one month. Hope don't cross Tasmanian Devil ! After that crazy trip, I'll go to Thailand to return to Koh Phangan for three months. For me it's the prettiest island in Thailand. And then, go back to Paris ;( I would be grateful you to help me to improve my English language, and I welcome you with pleasure.

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A trip to Australia

Hello, allow me to introduce myself

My name is Frederic. I would ask you to tell me if my English language could be clear enough. I mean for Australian people.

I'm going to leave France to go to Australia on February and even if I know I need more practice I would be glad to know that I might be understood.

I'm going to Australia for one year to make both a trip and work. I would like to discover that beautiful island throughout . I would like to meet lots of people and their culture and obviously meet incredible animals such as kangaroos or koalas as well !

To do that I already have bought my working holiday visa. That permits me to work in that country for six months and also take a rest during the next upcoming months !

I'm a photographer, so I think it'll be a great experience in term of discovery. Over the night I often dream about these wonderful landscapes.
I've been already visited many countries over the world, but it's the first time i'm going far.

I'll start visiting the biggest cities such as Sydney, Melbourne, Cairns and also Adelaide and Brisbane and then take some rest in the largest Desert (Victoria) of the territory for one month. Hope don't cross Tasmanian Devil !

After that crazy trip, I'll go to Thailand to return to Koh Phangan for three months. For me it's the prettiest island in Thailand.

And then, going back to Paris ;(

I would be grateful if you help me to improve my English language, and I welcome you with pleasure.

N.B. in the very last sentence i have cut that "to" because "help" is a causative verb.

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A trip to Australia

Hello, allow me to introduce myself

My name is Frederic. I would ask you to tell me if my English language is clear enough for Australian people.

I'm going to leave France to go to Australia on February although I know that I need more practice. I would be glad to know if my language is well understood.

I'm going to Australia for one year to make both a trip and work. I would like to discover that beautiful island and I would like to meet lots of people and their culture and obviously meet incredible animals such as kangaroos or koalas as well !

To do that I already have bought my working holiday visa. Which one permit me to work in that country during six months and also take a rest during the next months !

I'm a photographer, so I think it'll be a great experience in term of discovery. Over the night I often dream about those wonderful landscapes.
I've  already visited many countries over the world, but it's the first time to be in Australia !

I'll visit many cities such as Sydney, Melbourne, Cairns and also Adelaide and Brisbane and then take some rest in the largest Desert (Victoria) of the territory for one month. Hope don't cross Tasmanian Devil !

After that crazy trip, I'll go to Thailand to return to Koh Phangan for three months. For me it's the prettiest island in Thailand.

And then, going back to Paris ;(

I would be grateful if  you  helped me  improve my English language, and I welcome you with pleasure.
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A trip to Australia

Hello, please allow me to introduce myself.

My name is Frederic. I would ask you to tell me if my English language is clear enough. I mean for Australian people.

I'm going to leave France to go to Australia in February and even though I know I need more practice I would be glad to know that I might be understood.

I'm going to Australia for one year on both a trip and for work. I would like to discover that beautiful island by visiting all its territories. I would like to meet lots of people and their culture and obviously meet incredible animals such as kangaroos or koalas as well !

To do that I have already bought my working holiday visa. It permits me to work in that country for six months and also take a rest for the remaining time!

I'm a photographer, so I think it'll be a great experience in terms of discovery. At nights I often dream about these wonderful landscapes.
I've been already visited many countries worldwide but this will be my first time in Australia!

I'll visit to start the biggest cities such as Sydney, Melbourne, Cairns and also Adelaide and Brisbane and then take some rest in the largest desert (Victoria) for one month. Hopefully I won't cross the Tasmanian Devil !

After that crazy trip, I'll go to Thailand to return to Koh Phangan for three months. For me it's the prettiest island in Thailand.

And then I go back to Paris ;(

I would be grateful if you help me to improve my English and I welcome you with pleasure.

Very well written!

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A trip to Australia

Hello, allow me to introduce myself.

My name is Frederic. I would like to ask you if my English language is clear enough for Australian people to understand. I'm going to leave France to go to Australia on February . Although I know that I need more practice but I would be glad to know if my language is well understood.

I'm going to Australia for one year to make both a trip and work. I would like to discover that beautiful island and meet lots of people along with their culture and obviously meet incredible animals such as kangaroos or koalas as well !

To do that, I already bought my working holiday visa which permits me to work in that country for six months and also to take a rest during the next remaining months!

I'm a photographer, so I think it'll be a great experience in terms of discovery.

Over the night , I often dream about those wonderful landscapes. I've already been to many countries around the world, but it will be my first time travelling to Australia ! I'll visit many cities such as Sydney, Melbourne, Cairns , Adelaide and Brisbane . I would like to take some rest in the largest Desert territory (Victoria) for one month too.I Hope I won't cross a Tasmanian Devil !

After that crazy trip, I'll go to Thailand to revisit Koh Phangan for three months. For me , it's the prettiest island in Thailand.

Finally, I will be heading back to Paris ;(

I would really appreciate it if you help me improve my English language, and I welcome you with pleasure. 





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