whether cellphone's disadvantages are much more than its advantages
Nowadays ,when talking about cellphone,people always say that we spend too much on this tool ,and we don't cmomunicate enough with our family members and friends through face to face .To some extent ,it's true.but in my opinion ,we benefit much more from cellphone .
First ,this tool shortens the distance among people .When I went to university, I was homesick and I missed my Dad and my Mom so much .Thanks to the cellphone ,I could call them every day and it really helped me to get through that difficult time .
Second,cellphone can make our life more convenient.There are so many useful Apps which can be set up in cellphone .For instance, if you want to ask for a taxi ,you can just order one through a taxi-booking App called "DIDI" in your cellphone ,and you don't have to wait on the street .When the taxi arrives ,the driver would give you a call
It's undeniable that cellphone also brings some problems .But as far as I concerned ,these issues could be effectively solved by adopting appropriate measures.
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Whether the Cellphone's Disadvantages are much more than Outweigh its Advantages
Nowadays ,when talking about the cellphone, people always say that we spend too much time on this tool it, and we don't cmomunicate communicate enough with our family members and friends through face to face. To some extent, it's that is true, but in my opinion, we benefit much more from cellphones than vice versa.First, this tool the cellphone shortens the distance among between people. When I went to university, I was homesick, and I missed my dad and my mom so much .Thanks to the cellphone, I could call them every day, and it really helped me to get through that difficult time.
Second, the cellphone can make our life more convenient. There are so many useful apps which that can be set up in the cellphone. For instance, if you want to ask for a taxi, you can just order one through a taxi-booking app called "DIDI" in on your cellphone, and you don't have to wait on the street. When the taxi arrives ,the driver would gives you a call.
It's undeniable that the cellphone also brings some problems, but as far as I am concerned, these issues could be effectively solved by adopting appropriate measures.【句号,逗号之前没有空;句号,逗号之后有空。】
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On whether a cellphone's disadvantages are much more than its advantages
Nowadays ,when talking about cellphones, people always say that we spend too much on it and we don't communicate enough with our family and friends face to face .To some extent ,it's true but in my opinion we benefit much more from cellphones .First , this tool shortens the distance among people . When I went to university, I was homesick and missed my dad and my mom so much .Thanks to the cellphone I could call them every day and it really helped me to get through that difficult time .
Second, cellphones can make our life more convenient. There are so many useful Apps which can be set up on a cellphone, eg., if you want to book a taxi you can do it through a taxi-booking App called "DIDI" in your cellphone ,and you don't have to wait on the street .When the taxi arrives the driver would give you a call.
It's undeniable that cellphones also bring some problems but as far as I am concerned these issues could be effectively solved.
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Whether cellphones' disadvantages outweigh their advantages
Nowadays, people always say that we spend too much time on our cellphones and we don't communicate enough with our family members and friends face to face. To some extent, it's true, but in my opinion, cellphones benefit us much more than they harm us.Firstly, this tool shortens the distance between people. When I went to university, I was homesick and I missed my dad and my mom so much. Thanks to my cellphone, I could call them every day and it really helped me to get through that difficult time.
Secondly, cellphones can make our lives more convenient. There are so many useful apps that can be downloaded onto a cellphone. For instance, if you want to ask for a taxi, you can just order one through a taxi-booking app called "DIDI" in your cellphone, and you don't have to wait on the street. When the taxi arrives, the driver can give you a call.
It's undeniable that cellphones also cause some problems. But as far as I am concerned, these issues could be effectively solved by taking appropriate measures.
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