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Shanghai Last week I was in Shanghai. The big city I have been to some times. This time the purpose of my Shanghai trip is meeting. The meeting i attended is Qcon, one of most famous software & internet technical meeting in IT industry , more then 100 topics was been presented in 4 day. Sound amazing, but you can't hear cutting edge technology in this kind of meeting. it is too big to cutting-edge. Although there was no exciting news in my professional field, I have learned lots from other technical field. More accurately,I have learned lots about how to talk about other technical field ;-) Due to bad weather and full day long meeting ,I have no outdoor activities during these days. The only thing that can balance the indoor depression is the last day musemu visit. The exhibition called "Shanshui Within" is exhibiting in Shanghai museum of contemporary art. My high light of the visit is works from artists Qiu Anxiong(邱黯雄) and Pan Xi(潘曦). Both the artists are inspiresed by the tradition of chinese monochromes painting but have created theirs own style and painting technic successfully. After all,I became able to feel the serenity of mountain view in my little town after unable to see them one week in Shanghai.

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Shanghai

Last week I was in Shanghai. The big city I have been to some a few times. This time the purpose of my Shanghai trip is was a meeting.

The meeting I attended is Qcon, one of most famous software & internet technical meeting in the IT industry.  More then 100 topics was been were presented in 4 day. Sounds amazing, but you can't hear about cutting-edge technology in this kind of meeting. it is too big for these types of topics. to cutting-edge.

Although there was no exciting news in my professional field, I have learned lots from a lot about other technical fields. More accurately, I have learned lots a lot about how to talk about regarding other technical fields ;-)

Due to bad weather and full day long meetings, I have had no time for outdoor activities during these days. The only thing that could can balance the indoor depression is was the last day museum visit. The exhibition called "Shanshui Within" is exhibiting in Shanghai museum of contemporary art. My highlight of the visit is was seeing works from artists Qiu Anxiong(邱黯雄) and Pan Xi(潘曦). Both the artists are inspiresed by the tradition of Chinese monochrome painting but have created theirs own style and painting technique successfully.

After all In the end, I became was able to feel the serenity of the mountain views in my little town after being unable to see them during my one week in Shanghai.


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Hi! My English is not as good as it should to be, nevertheless I see few mistakes in your text. You have to pay more attention to plural / single according with verbs. For example: “100 topics was been presented” in this case you have to use “were” because “100 topics” are plural. And in this case you have to use Past Indefinite, Passive Voice because here is not link to present. So it will be “100 topics were presented”. “Sound amazing” is single so the verb should be “sounds amazing”.

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