The Stranger. Part 3. Sudden strike. Please, correct my mistakes.
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I was silly when I guessed not organise the escape right then. "We had to wait some time" I thought at that moment. They had held us till the winter came. They forced us to work hard for all time we were captured. Of cource they would like to go on to hold us if they could... We've tried to escape several times, but every time we stopped at the right moment so they didn't notice our cocky attempts to flee...
It was the day the first snow was falling. As usually we were in our hotel room. Invades only let us from the room when we must work. We heard a beep was coming from the streets. I just looked out of the window... I saw a lorry going upon the road.
"Lisa, look over there!" I said. Five guys from the town began slowly coming to the lorry when it stopped.
"Greetings from the Sneachta Bán, good boys" Said the driver of the truck.At the same moment several men went out of the semitrailer of the lorry. They hadn't any weapon, but they stormed guys who had assault riffles... I didn't understand what was going on at that moment. The local people was defeated.
"This way! Quickly!" The driver screemed to us
"Lisa, perhaps he's calling us. I think you know him. Let's go there. The time has come to f..k away from here"
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I was silly when I guessed I could not organise the escape right then. "We have to wait some time," I had thought at that moment. They had held us till the winter came. They forced us to work hard for the whole time we were captured. Of course they would like to keep holding us if they could... We'd tried to escape several times, but every time we stopped at the right moment so they didn't notice our cocky attempts to flee...
"Lisa, look over there!" I said. Five guys from the town slowly walked to the lorry when it stopped.
"Greetings from the Sneachta Bán, good boys," said the driver of the truck. At the same moment several men came out of the semitrailer of the lorry. They didn't have any weapons, yet they stormed guys who had assault rifles... I didn't understand what was going on at that moment. The local people were defeated.
"This way! Quickly!" the driver screamed at us.
"Lisa, perhaps he's calling us. I think you know him. Let's go. The time has come to get the f..k away from here."
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