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20TH ANNIVERSARY BONDI EXHIBITION I went to 20th Anniversary Bondi Exhibition. There are from Bondi beach to Tamarama coastal. There are a lot of sculptures of various sizes, so a lot of people had visited. I did not have much interest, but I was fun after I went.In particular, I like the large sculpture because there is a powerful. And scenery is beautiful. I had a good day.

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The 20th Anniversary Bondi Exhibition

I went to the 20th Anniversary of the Bondi Exhibition. There are It (The exhibits) stretched from Bondi Beach to the Tamarama coastal. There are a lot of sculptures of various sizes, so a lot of (many)* people had visited. I did not have much interest at first, but I it was fun after I went.**_In particular, I liked the large sculpture because there is a it seemed powerful*** and scenery is beautiful. I had a good day.


*Reading "a lot of" twice in a row like that sounds repetitive, so I suggest using "many" or another synonym.

**Do you mean "it looked impressive"?

***A more natural way of saying this would be: "I wasn't interested at first, but it turned out to be fun." or "At first, I wasn't that interested, but I was glad I went because it was fun."

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