An unforgettable day
I will never forget that day when I got my drive license. It was on Friday, 23 January 2004. I passed my first exam last summer at the first attempt. I was exhausted for starting my driving classes.
A short time later, when I was ready I decided to try the second part of the exam but I failed.
I didn't get on well with my tutor. I heated her. We had a lot of argument but finally the great day arrived. I drove as never and I got it. I felt proud of myself.
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The only real problem here is the last paragraph:
The second sentence is confusing even though I think I understand the jest of it. In 'I heated her', do you mean 'I hated her'. Heat means warm, which can be used with various connotations depending on the context.
Sinon felicitations. (mon clavier est americain 'QWERTY' sans accents.)
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An unforgettable day
I will never forget that day when I got my driver's license. It was on Friday, 23 January 2004 (to make this sound better I would say "It was on Friday, January 24th, 2004"). I passed my first exam last summer at on the first attempt. I was exhausted for starting my driving classes. (I am not sure here if you mean "I was exhausted from taking my driving classes" meaning you were tried from having to take the classes previously or something else).A short time later, when I was ready I decided to try the second part of the exam but I failed.
I didn't get on well with my tutor. I heated her. We had a lot of argument (I would say "we argued a lot" instead) but finally the great day arrived. I drove as never and I got it. (this sentence is missing something - maybe it should be "I drove as I never have before...") I felt proud of myself.
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