cafe shop
I came to a cafe shop for cafe after I had repaired my belt this afternoon. An old women came into the cafe shop while I was sitting to drink the cafe. She looks very old. She came to me and asked if I need flowes. Then I knew she wanted to sell the flowes. She went to the next guest after I refused her. I left the cafe shop in a few minutes later.
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You can say coffee shop or you can say cafe, but you can't say cafe shop.
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cafe shop
I came to a cafe shop for cafe after I had repaired my belt this afternoon. An old women came into the cafe shop while I was sitting to drink the cafe. She looks very old. She came to me and asked if I need flowes. Then I knew she wanted to sell the flowes. She went to the next guest after I refused her. I left the cafe shop in a few minutes later.----------
Coffee Shop
I went to a coffee shop to get coffee after I repaired my belt this afternoon. While I was sitting, drinking my coffee a women came into the shop. She looked very old. She came over to me and asked if I wanted some flowers, but I knew she wanted to sell them to me. After I refused her, she went on to the next guest. A few minutes later, I left the coffee shop.
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Good job, you are close; but I have a few corrections for you to consider. I made some grammar corrections and reordered some of your sentences to make it sound more natural. Also you don't have to repeat "old" in the two phrases: "an old woman" and "she looks very old."
Just remember to keep practicing!
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