First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi. :) My name is Chisato. I've been studying English since I was elementary school student.

My friend lived in Australia, so I went there with my sister. At the time, I couldn't speak English, but I was interested in languages, especially English. I went to an English school for about four years. We couldn't speak Japanese during lessons. It was really difficult for me. X(

This year, I went to the U.K. for about two months. I stayed at my host family's house and went to school to study. It was a really good experience for me, because I wanted to improve my speaking skill and I needed to study English grammar - and I made many friends around the world. :)

BTW, Do you know Natsuko Toda? I respect her because I wanna be an interpreter like her. This is my big dream.

Thank you for reading.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi :)My name is Chisato.

I've been studying English when  since I was an elementary school student.

My friend lived in Australia, so I went there with my sister.
At that time, I couldn't speak English,but I was interested in language(s) especially English.
I went to an English school for about 4years.We (You and who else?) couldn't speak Japanese during the lessen(lessons). It was really difficult for me X(

This year, I went to the UK for about 2months.
I stayed host family's house with a host family  and I went school to study.
It was a really good experience for me.
Because, I wanted to improve my speaking skill(s) and I need to study English grammar.
And I got many friends around the world :)

BTW,Do you know Natsuko Toda?
I respect (idolize) her because I wanna be an interpreter like her.
This is my Big dream.


Thank you for reading.


Your entry is well structured and made good sense. You did well with punctuations and capitalizations.
Grammar is also near pefrect. However most of my corrections were adding small connectors/determiners for words. Example. to, an, for.

Besides those little mistakes it was really good :)