Adult child
In the midst of so many problems
I will leading to life
Or rather, life got me going ...
Not that I be antagonistic,
Just do not know what will become of me
In Forthcoming days
If you continue the same way
Do you remember when you promised not to leave me?
It is gradually going to be apart.
Do you remember when you said you loved me?
I tried not to believe in fear of suffering future
And now I'm suffering ...
Why do people play with the feelings of others?
The answer I have
But, I try to understand
I think it is not knowable by all
The full meaning of the word love
This "adult child"
Do not know what may be the next
The become merely a sentimental toy.
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Adult child (Childish or Immature)
In the midst of so many problemsI was leading a life
Or rather, life got me going ...
Not that I am being antagonistic,
(Just do not) I just don't know what will become of me
In forthcoming days
If you continue the same way
Do you remember when you promised not to leave me?
It is gradually going to be apart We are gradually falling apart
Do you remember when you said you loved me?
I try not to believe in fear of suffering (in the) future
And now I'm suffering ...
Why do people play with the feelings of others?
The answer I have I think I know the answer
But, I try to understand (why)
I think it is not known by all
The full meaning of the word love
This "adult child"
I do not know what (what might happen next)
(Love has become) merely a sentimental toy.
*Your writing is decent, keep writing! I want to believe this is a personal poem so being creative is good..
*My suggestions are in (brackets) and minor erros in purple.
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