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Should we forbid children playing video games? I've read an article written by a father whose son has been addicted to video games deeply, which professed that the government of China should pass a law to forbid children playing video games so they can focus themselves on learning. I don't think it's a good way to let students make up their minds to study hard, we admit the video games are harmful somehow to teenagers, but it clearly depends on how to be used. Students in China are in high pressure every day, if they can play those games on computer for a while, that will be a good way to relax and leave them happy memories, and nowadays, the video games are no longer something useless or harmful, it's a complete industry containing professional practice, software developing, advertisement and so on. If this man's son is fully interested in games, maybe he should let the kid devote to this career, as we said, all roads lead to Rome.

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Should we forbid children playing video games?

I read an article written by a father whose son has been is very addicted to video games deeply, in which he called upon professed that the government of China to should pass a law to forbid children from playing video games so they can focus more themselves on their studies. learning. ( I use "is"  because I think he is still addicted)
I don't think it's a good way for parents to decide on what a child should do in their free time as a way ensure that their child studies hard, and even though I admit that the video games can be harmful to teenagers somehow, but it really depends on how they are being played .

Students in China are under great  pressure every day, and if they can play those games on computers -- even for a while -- for a while, that it will be a good way for them to relax, leaving them energised with happy memories of the game. and nowadays, By the way, the playing video games is no longer seen as something that is of no benefit useless or harmful, it has become an industry on its own, with containing its own professional players practice, and the related software development, advertisement and so on. If this man's son is really keen on playing these interested in games, maybe the man should let his kid devote himself to making playing video games as a to this career. As we say, "All roads lead to Rome".

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Should we forbid children from playing video games?

I've read an article written by a father whose son was has been deeply addicted to video games deeply, which professed called on/suggested that the government of China should pass a law to forbid children from playing video games so they can focus themselves on learning.
I don't think it's a good way to let force students make up their minds to study hard. We may admit the that video games are harmful somehow to teenagers, but it clearly depends on how they are to be used.
Students in China are in under high pressure every day, and if they can play those games on the computer for a while, that will be a good way to relax and leave them create happy memories, and.  Nowadays, the video games are no longer something useless or harmful, but are it's a complete industry containing encompassing professional practice, software developing development, advertisement advertising and so on. If this man's son is fully interested in games, maybe he should let the kid devote himself to this career: as we said say, all roads lead to Rome. [suggest also: there's more than one way to skin a cat]


Nice job! I just made a few suggestions. I speak American English, so these corrections are stylistically more American than UK.

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So good, I agree with you :D

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