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I made a magic wand and a butterfly ornament from 100 yen products. Halloween is coming soon! Are you going to wear Halloween costume? I'll be a magic rabbit this year. so, I need a magic wand. I decided to make my wand from 100 yen products. I made it, but I thought that it was a little bit restrained in color and design. So, I made a butterfly ornament and glue it to the magic wand. Also I made bunny ears! If you want to know how to make these items, let me give you my blog. (http://aki-enjoy.blogspot.jp/) Happy Halloween!!

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I made a magic wand and a butterfly ornament from 100 yen products.

Halloween is coming soon!

Are you going to wear Halloween costume?

I'll be a magic rabbit this year.
Thus, I need a magic wand.

I decided to make my wand from some cheap materials.

I made it, but I thought that it was a little drab in both color and design.

So, I made a butterfly ornament and glued it to the magic wand.

Also I made bunny ears!

If you want to know how to make these items, please check out my blog. (http://aki-enjoy.blogspot.jp/)

Happy Halloween!!

You have very few errors! The only thing that looks strange is that you don't write in paragraphs. Did you do that on purpose to make it easier to correct?

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